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The Fucktory (Ode) by horus8 On a slate grey day
In the hazy month of May
With my stainless steel
lunchbox, and thermos. I
make my way to the fucktory.
In a putrid green flanel
I cross o'er a channel
to play with my light panel
and pull upon my handel. Pressing
something into (a) shape at the fucktory.
Of course I've clocked in
and donned protectant for my skin
I never leave my locker open
In case the token Jew, or Negroid,
decides to steal my lunch at the fucktory.
I never look my boss in the eye
for fear I mayest cry, or die, or Pi
mathematically an outcasted single guy.
Inconsequentially wondering why
I ever decided to work at the fucktory?
Perhaps it was because of poppa
calling me a queerly gay poeta
that would rather paint kneeling Geishas
with flutes in hand, but with no band. Ah,
just waiting for a raise & a hug at the fucktory.
Guilty ignorant and rather poor
Daily, I return home quite sore
To a house of inquisitive bores
That call me a whore as much as possible.
Even whilst we sleep I weep for us of the fucktories.
Up the ladder:
We'll be Louvers and shade
Down the ladder:
The Angry Bush
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 7.1666665
Posted: October 2, 2003 10:43 AM PDT; Last modified: October 2, 2003 10:43 AM PDTWeighted score: 6.58396 Overall Rank: 624 Comments:
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
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2-Oct-03/10:52 AM
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very creative and clear. Though I'm always against racism and biggotry, I admit appreciating your honesty for fear of "jews and negroids." As is common practice where fear is so freely distributed.
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
> J.B. Manning
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2-Oct-03/11:07 AM
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Outstanding! Except, I'm not the guy in the story. It's a fictional piece about a nonfictional reality. See how that works? Because, what you don't know is that I actually am a black jewish dwarf lesbian with a prostetic face. Therefore, it would be impractical and foolish to say I was a bigot, a racist or, a gay poet, or even a Toyota Camry.
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
> Bachus
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2-Oct-03/11:42 AM
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what's with the multiple user names? - Yes I see fear distributed on a regular basis. In media. If you have pimples, you wont get laid, you're a loser if you aren't a high bad jock with a big dick, there's nothing but angry gun slinging black men in the news, be afraid, we're about to be attacked by third world terrorists with unlimited supplies of nuclear nothings, BE AFRAID so George Bush can protect you, BE AFRAID so you can buy something to protect yourself. BUY BUY BUY to quence your FEAR...afraid of not being kewl? Well, just buy a nice new car and you'll feel better? Afraid someone will steal your car? Well, just buy an alarm, a gun, and a dog to protect yourself? Not afraid enough, not protected enough? Just watch the news...
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
> J.B. Manning
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2-Oct-03/5:00 PM
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HAHA, MM is my HERO! We're from the same town. I'm going to meet him on the 18th!
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.128.208.144
> J.B. Manning
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2-Oct-03/5:16 PM
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Wasn't it Marilyn Manson who was banging on about the fear-factor in advertising etc and then Michael Moore went to Heston's house and had a massive go at him for liking guns but the guy was too old to know what was going on and then THE END
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
> -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
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3-Oct-03/11:25 AM
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Yes, Marilyn started the idea about advertising projecting fear to incourage consumption. The Heston bit was pretty damn funny, if you ask me. On the DVD set Michael tells you that Heston's people wouldn't let him off of the property, so he threw the film over the gate to his driver. Pretty funny stuff.
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
> -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
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3-Oct-03/11:27 AM
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And there was a lot more to it than Heston's "Liking guns." He's the president of the NRA.
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
> J.B. Manning
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2-Oct-03/5:26 PM
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Did you know I went to Troy Athens and Wayne State?
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
> horus8
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3-Oct-03/11:27 AM
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Really? That's kewl.
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
> J.B. Manning
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3-Oct-03/11:30 AM
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Crystal, I can't ever tell if you're trying to be witty or facitious. I think you should stick to your cute little comments either way. Anything else is short of your strengths and probably motivated by the energy of the regulars on this site. Don't let them infect you darlin. ;-)
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
> Bachus
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2-Oct-03/3:15 PM
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Why are you commenting on Horus8s poem as if it were your own? Are you using multiple user names? Why is that?
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
> J.B. Manning
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2-Oct-03/5:28 PM
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Because, he is horus8 cheeky poo. We all are.
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
> horus8
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3-Oct-03/11:31 AM
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I don't get it. Who's we?
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
> horus8
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3-Oct-03/11:35 AM
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and you commented on one of his poems as if you are two people, but here you seem to be commenting as if you're the same. Please explain.
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
> J.B. Manning
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2-Oct-03/11:11 AM
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Woah, you've seen fear distrubuted? excellent, what a rare and majestic occurence for you to have witnessed. It what form was it packaged and passed out? Can, foam with saran wrap, or digitally remastered.
s-4 you left out a k. on purpose probably. no. I don't mean a k as in A.K.-47 either. and you're a fam crammin toyota sienna mini van. give it up.
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