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B.F. (Lyric) by skaskowski
you were a fragile flower
that i stooped to pick,
and scooped you up in my moment
of stupor.
and do you know?
you proved to be
more than an answer.
more like a mystery waiting to be
pieced together.
Yet that mystery still offered something more.
My precious flower, you hold in your petals
the dew of my tears.
so i hold you tighter
than ever
you're lighter
than a feather,
and i fear that i'll crush you.
Please place your petals where
my heart beats
freely.
Be a lapel on my chest
to stand as a stapled reminder.
Of what i've tried to digress to,
but never lived up to.
Never was able to.
I stooped to pick you
and pricked my fingers on your thorns.
how my skin bleeds still,
how my wound is layed open fresh still.
How i long to be
unknowingly
picked by you
just as freely.
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Posted: October 9, 2003 1:55 PM PDT; Last modified: October 9, 2003 1:55 PM PDT
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