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facku (Free verse) by J.B. Manning
I like choc-o-lot A lot Because it’s goooooooooooooooooooood I’d eat choc-o-lot A lot If I coooooooooooooooooooooould

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.798294
Overall Rank: 11205
Posted: October 9, 2003 10:13 AM PDT; Last modified: October 9, 2003 10:13 AM PDT
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[7] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 9-Oct-03/10:55 AM | Reply
Do.
[1] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 9-Oct-03/5:20 PM | Reply
So, am I wrong about this - we only get three entries a week, right?

If I were to give you 3 dollars, would you eat one - or, if say I were to give you 3 apples... wait - get your own damn apples.
[n/a] Joe-joe @ 208.206.232.111 | 10-Oct-03/7:53 AM | Reply
This is one fucking big speed bump I just can't get past!! Only kidding, I would never play such a childish game with you. This work obviously did not take much effort but sometimes the best stuff we do is the shit that just comes off the top of our heads. This was amusing..And yes, I do love you...now don't be naughty..not in that way...Peace JB
[n/a] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > Joe-joe | 10-Oct-03/11:53 AM | Reply
It's been a stressful couple of weeks and I've been WAAAAAy too serious. So I wrote it for the sake of commical comments. lol.
[n/a] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 | 10-Oct-03/11:53 AM | Reply
*comical...
[8] dragonfly @ 65.234.193.254 | 18-Oct-03/9:14 PM | Reply
Ghirardelli totally ruined chocolate for me.
[n/a] ARTIE @ 66.68.146.139 > dragonfly | 5-Dec-03/10:25 AM | Reply
Ghirardelli in da belly, Choc-a-bloc with choc-o-lot.
Mmmmmmmm, I prefer Swisssssssssss to thisssssssssss.
JB, that's just more for uhssssssssssssss.
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