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Why do you give yourself blue tens? (Haiku) by Bachus
Obviously you believe like attracts like. You are a green 0.

Up the ladder: One night stand
Down the ladder: Funny Little World

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Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
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10  .. 51
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.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 01
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.. 11
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.142857
Weighted score: 5.8354955
Overall Rank: 1608
Posted: October 2, 2003 11:46 AM PDT; Last modified: October 2, 2003 11:46 AM PDT
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[7] nentwined @ 209.31.226.178 | 2-Oct-03/2:26 PM | Reply
565

:blink:

566. funny how quickly one can read 'zero' when not paying attention.

la.

I don't like the way you use the title, but... no, I don't like it. That is all.

self-rewarding tens
do not attract green brethren
You are a zero.
[n/a] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > nentwined | 2-Oct-03/3:19 PM | Reply
I like both yours and nentwined's Haiku here.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > nentwined | 2-Oct-03/5:19 PM | Reply
It's five six five genius.
[7] nentwined @ 209.31.226.178 > horus8 | 2-Oct-03/5:34 PM | Reply
1 you
2 are
3 a
4 green
5 zer
6 oh

?

oh. is that a letter not a number?
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > nentwined | 2-Oct-03/6:50 PM | Reply
You have green hair, and are old, TO OLD FOR GREEN HAIR, damnit.
[n/a] sliver @ 65.178.224.248 | 2-Oct-03/8:46 PM | Reply
As are you with this. You know, someone likes giving bunches of those anonymous 0's also. Write one for those cowards.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > sliver | 2-Oct-03/9:14 PM | Reply
I did, a few times, here's one, and it was #1 for some time, though I did not think it worthy and took it ten.

http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=57128
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > sliver | 2-Oct-03/9:16 PM | Reply
I meant down not ten, I'm drunk.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > sliver | 9-Oct-03/11:01 AM | Reply
I can't, I pled the fifth. lol.
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