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Funny Little World (Free verse) by LintyWeenis
Will you walk with me again? I know it's been a while, my friend. Inside the light there is a way, we can find out what it means. Well hold my hand, I won't let go. I promise you, we'll make it through. Just keep your word and I'll keep mine don't tell them, we'll be just fine. Can you see it? The tiny key sparkles with moonshine brings a shake in the knees. That's it, just grab it. I'm right by your side. Oh, you fell. And now you've died. I told you that I'd keep my word. I got what I came for. And so thank you, my old friend. It's a funny little world.

Down the ladder: Lavendar Gate

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.142857
Weighted score: 5.8354955
Overall Rank: 1609
Posted: July 10, 2004 7:30 AM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2004 7:30 AM PDT
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Comments:
[8] MR Blobby @ 62.31.23.30 | 11-Jul-04/12:59 AM | Reply
blobby?
[10] edpeterson @ 68.79.1.86 | 11-Jul-04/6:07 AM | Reply
well. this poem...not so good. but your screen name is the best i have seen...perfect, diamond brilliance.
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[n/a] LintyWeenis @ 205.188.117.13 | 11-Jul-04/6:57 AM | Reply
I was in a writing slump when I wrote this. I think I wrote it just cause I was insanely bored. But yea, all comments are probably true. :)

-Linty of Weenis's
[9] sliver @ 63.190.80.10 | 4-Sep-04/11:15 AM | Reply
Did he have to die?
[n/a] LintyWeenis @ 152.163.101.10 | 11-Sep-04/3:42 PM | Reply
Hahaha, well burn my buscuits. This poem actually won something. I honestly didn't like this poem too much and am very suprised that it's doing as well as it is. But anyways, if my crappy poem can win something, then just think of the stuff you real writers can win.
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