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Funny Little World (Free verse) by LintyWeenis
Will you walk with me again?
I know it's been a while, my friend.
Inside the light there is a way,
we can find out what it means.
Well hold my hand, I won't let go.
I promise you, we'll make it through.
Just keep your word and I'll keep mine
don't tell them, we'll be just fine.
Can you see it? The tiny key
sparkles with moonshine brings a shake in the knees.
That's it, just grab it. I'm right by your side.
Oh, you fell.
And now you've died.
I told you that I'd keep my word.
I got what I came for.
And so thank you, my old friend.
It's a funny little world.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.142857
Weighted score: 5.8354955
Overall Rank: 1609
Posted: July 10, 2004 7:30 AM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2004 7:30 AM PDT
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