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Lavendar Gate

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Sep 2002 · 7 comments

A place that is ours, but never was Kind hands have stayed the hours here Sounds of the street ascend and fade The one I love lies near I sit at table and think and write And listen to footsteps below The house is settling for the night But still, I seek to know The green-swathed walls of our attic keep Remind me of someone I used to be The church bell tolls each hour anew And now, my dear, I turn to you A fellow journeyman on a quest Our paths have joined, and here we rest

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[8] Christof 10-Sep-02/8:58 AM Reply
As usual, graceful and gracious. And slightly medieval here - I think it's the 'kepp' that does it.
[8] Christof 10-Sep-02/8:59 AM Reply
That's 'keep'. Sorry.
[7] god'swife 10-Sep-02/12:01 PM Reply
Lovely. "Green-swathed" & "attic keep" seem slightly pretentious in this setting. Stanza 1 has a simpler voice.
[n/a] <~> › god'swife 10-Sep-02/12:14 PM Reply
yeah. but this is and oldie, dredged up. it's a decade old. the suite was done up in william morris green wallpaper, and it was a garret, so it fits. 'lavendar gate' was a b&b in marblehead, mass. it's now defunct. it was in an old parson's house, right next to the church...
[7] god'swife › <~> 10-Sep-02/12:37 PM Reply
oh! So the place itself was a little overdone for it's setting. You establish the sense of quiet late evening very well. I picture you in flannels.
[n/a] <~> › god'swife 10-Sep-02/12:43 PM Reply
yes. it was run by anglophiles who subsequently moved to england. it was very much a literary romantic's dream-come-true
[2] Dark Angle 11-Sep-02/12:36 AM Reply
hmm, boring, journeyman? quest? sounds like too many role playing games?