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Thats one rockin' bacchanalian orgy. (Haiku) by ==Doylum
Miss Chile in thong 'phooar she'd get a good stoning' love's helping orphans.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.8333335
Overall Rank: 1611
Posted: November 27, 2002 7:54 AM PST; Last modified: November 27, 2002 7:54 AM PST
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[9] UnityMitford @ 167.206.181.179 | 27-Nov-02/8:41 AM | Reply
nice. brilliant even. somehow, the only thing that would improve it for me is if you made her from a different country. chile doesn't have the loaded irony i want. 9
[6] poetandknowit @ 65.101.210.220 | 27-Nov-02/9:30 AM | Reply
It is up to you Dolie to save the fate of English literature. Go now to the towns, to the country, rid the isles of cultural mediocrity. Ring your cowbell in the night, line them up, make them take notice. Take away their TVs. Do you prefer goats over pigs? Do they have souls? It is good to see you keeping with current events. This will get the Hours8 journalism approval.
[n/a] ==Doylum @ 213.122.164.219 > poetandknowit | 27-Nov-02/2:06 PM | Reply
No it isn't stop being a silly you know thats a job for "LEARSQUAD" tm. Cultural mediocrity? why whatever do you mean, we have Big Brother, you've been Framed, all right on the night, corination street, and impressive imports from the colonies such as neigbours and shortland street. If i rang a cow bell no one would hear they'd be to busy improving themselves in front of the television, so to take them away would be counter productive. By the way it's nice to see your anglopbobia is on the wane, and you feel able to help out
A ram or a pork its all the same to me, and yes i would assume they have souls, just because they have long hair and talk higher up the range there really isn't any reason to suspect they're machines without a ghost.
PS never give me a 6 again you SLAG. stop trying to appeal to my feminine side you know i'm barely worth a 1
[6] maffy @ 62.105.88.10 | 1-Apr-03/4:17 AM | Reply
Wicked !
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