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Thats one rockin' bacchanalian orgy. (Haiku) by ==Doylum

Miss Chile in thong 'phooar she'd get a good stoning' love's helping orphans.

UnityMitford 27-Nov-02/8:41 AM
nice. brilliant even. somehow, the only thing that would improve it for me is if you made her from a different country. chile doesn't have the loaded irony i want. 9




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