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Funny Little World (Free verse) by LintyWeenis

Will you walk with me again? I know it's been a while, my friend. Inside the light there is a way, we can find out what it means. Well hold my hand, I won't let go. I promise you, we'll make it through. Just keep your word and I'll keep mine don't tell them, we'll be just fine. Can you see it? The tiny key sparkles with moonshine brings a shake in the knees. That's it, just grab it. I'm right by your side. Oh, you fell. And now you've died. I told you that I'd keep my word. I got what I came for. And so thank you, my old friend. It's a funny little world.

LintyWeenis 11-Jul-04/6:57 AM
I was in a writing slump when I wrote this. I think I wrote it just cause I was insanely bored. But yea, all comments are probably true. :)

-Linty of Weenis's




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