| Re: a comment on Ginger Prawns prior to Sea world with Jeremy Irons by Bachus |
26-Sep-03/6:46 PM |
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Uh, pardon me, but where did you find your user name? I don't know why, but it seems vaguely familiar?
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| Re: Intersection poetry by INTRANSIT |
26-Sep-03/1:34 PM |
I would give it a companion piece in another stanza the same size.
Like:
At the bottom
of the post, hops
A blind crow
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| Re: Ode to the Renesis by INTRANSIT |
26-Sep-03/1:30 PM |
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Your time will arrive my friend. Sorry, about the Settle thing, he made me swear on the back of a square.
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| Re: a comment on "I post here cause I have a lot of readers" by Bachus |
26-Sep-03/1:06 PM |
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I see you've been to Pakistan?
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| Re: swamp of devils by crwncka1 |
26-Sep-03/1:01 PM |
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This poem would be a perfect companion piece to the sound of a turd trying to pull itself back together the day after a relentlessly pounding rain storm.
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| Re: AND A NICE CUP OF CHAR by Garrett S Sexton |
26-Sep-03/12:55 PM |
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In New South Whales we head shoot our palfrey and grow are own thyme shrubbers. 5 fur the tittle
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| Re: >~{In the Shadow of a Crooked Ceiling}~< by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
26-Sep-03/12:50 PM |
I loved how you confused star trek for starwars, and then later, them both, for Chud-Tron. lol
A couple of errors "No, more that a machine," than,
and there was another in there too. So here's a 9.
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| Re: Life's Work by baughworm |
26-Sep-03/12:42 PM |
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In the end it begins to show promise.
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| Re: Conform by oldschool |
26-Sep-03/12:41 PM |
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| Re: (fragment) by razorgrin |
25-Sep-03/11:17 PM |
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God... I lost my load on tha... haaa 10 spheres until #2.
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| Re: a comment on The fetus farm by horus8 |
25-Sep-03/11:11 PM |
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It's so sick... Yesterday, I threw up a fetus.
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| Re: The Light by the_unknown_angel83 |
25-Sep-03/3:59 PM |
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Sounds like a bad case of microwaved sodomy.
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| Re: a comment on electrocaridiogram by skaskowski |
24-Sep-03/4:47 PM |
Ahhh, I see, yes, that is quite a big leech.
I think on Faces of death part three, this girl gets killed by a giant radioactive leech somewhere in Lousiana?
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| Re: a comment on When my poems go platinum by horus8 |
24-Sep-03/4:40 PM |
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certainly, that's understandable.
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| Re: a comment on SupremeDreamer by Nirvana13666 |
24-Sep-03/2:07 PM |
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And I'm out right now, in my backyard writing, I haven't even left the house yet, and I've already made almost a gran actually 750.00$ So I really don't need to go out. I enjoy my home, it's beautiful, and allows me the music, food, drink, and family an friends surrounding me in a gorgeous environment of my creation, Plants, animals, freash air HAAA, naturally, I do make lot's of phone calls and emails during the day, but that's it, for me. Otherwise, my days are spent developing my talents being creative and free. Istop 9-5ing years and years ago at 24 actually. See, what you don't get is that I work at home writing, I have no schedule other than what I 'want' lol. Sure I have deadlines, and If I want to record music I go across the street to my studio, and If I book an acting gig, I leave, pick up my laptop, and go do the job, but my real love is poetry, so I do it all day long 'while' i'm doing a million other things (writing 2 movies, entertaining friends, composing music, editing my manuscripts for literary competitions for publications I respect. If I do go out, it's to perform for money at hip clubs that I don't ever frequent other than to PLAY IN, or eat, or travel, I don't hang out anymore with children at clubs or get loaded... it's just to boring and pathetic of an activity to waste energy on anymore. Kind of like drunken one night stands and cocaine floozys eating your eggs in the morning. YAWN. Any how. your conversation becoming a yawn, and my mother will be coming home to prepare me lunch soon, and pour me a nice cold brown beer.
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| Re: a comment on SupremeDreamer by Nirvana13666 |
24-Sep-03/1:54 PM |
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And don't you think it's ridiculously posh to use Nirvana as a user name? It's not very inventive deary, and it best it's silly and borrowed. and 13666? woah, I'm worried you might just be EVIL. you are an asshat, period. your poetry? a lap snorke for the catatonic.
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| Re: a comment on SupremeDreamer by Nirvana13666 |
24-Sep-03/1:52 PM |
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By the way I've read everyone's poems on poemranker, and yours are no different, it doesn't mean I'm overly impressed by them, or you would have won my GQT awarde or a Bachian swagger award. Also, I have left 6,000 comments on the ranker, and I gurantee the better ones are not on your poetry. Why? you might ask. Because, your poetry is mediocre and horribly one dimensional.
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| Re: a comment on Lotion by impert&ent |
21-Sep-03/10:00 AM |
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And a free mason that hates bricks named Manly?
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| Re: a comment on Lotion by impert&ent |
21-Sep-03/9:57 AM |
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Can you do a version that involves a Croation from Laos?
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| Re: emblem esoterica by DreamerSupreme |
21-Sep-03/9:52 AM |
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