poemranker ::(fragment) by razorgrin

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Free verse № 66507

(fragment)

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Sep 2003 · Edited 25 Sep 2003 · 3 comments

Make the chains around my neck chime like bells. Add a collar of violet half-moons while a copper veil as strong as vines binds your fingers and my hands carve hieroglyphs into your back. You know that I am the Rosetta stone. I know I am the code itself.

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[7] <~> 25-Sep-03/6:57 PM Reply
wound copper. tricksy, he is. he watches us, yess, he does.
[10] Bachus 25-Sep-03/11:17 PM Reply
God... I lost my load on tha... haaa 10 spheres until #2.
[8] Bill Z Bub 25-Sep-03/11:51 PM Reply
I like the rosetta stone metaphor.