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Ginger Prawns prior to Sea world with Jeremy Irons (Free verse) by Bachus
I am so rich I cry often. "Sunny had been unwell" Insulin, Insulin, no more egg nog FOR CHRIST SAKE I'M PALID! Perhaps, I'll get naked in the den. Polar bear myself and croquette balls. "I don't want a doctor, I want to be left alone" "With my letters" Occasionally, when I'm feeling lonely? I'll flip off people randomly on my way for soup, and tea, and ginger prawns. I have read a many tattered book while painting my nails with a leopard snook On the verge, a total crook, A diabetic In denial. Tic tacs toe, loose smack, hackey sack mo fo... What the fuck let's hit the disco. Pull my pants down & Lobster mash 4 Fan blown cash to my B hip symplux rash Good night my dear I'm a proper steer as queer as pea green fauna. Do you wanna be my girl? I envision you often late at night Letting your hands find the meat of it. With that seam ripper and that eel tongue. For a joke, later? Menstruate in the shark pool.

Up the ladder: Goes the Spoils
Down the ladder: keep on digging

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.6363635
Weighted score: 6.318182
Overall Rank: 860
Posted: September 25, 2003 11:09 PM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2003 11:09 PM PDT
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Comments:
[5] FreeFormFixation @ 216.125.247.11 | 26-Sep-03/11:23 AM | Reply
that's a lot of skin.
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > FreeFormFixation | 26-Sep-03/11:50 AM | Reply
Perhaps, you should start jogging?
[8] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.68 | 26-Sep-03/4:57 PM | Reply
Mensturate in the shark pool!!! Why didn't I think of that?
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > ?-Dave_Mysterious-? | 26-Sep-03/6:46 PM | Reply
Uh, pardon me, but where did you find your user name? I don't know why, but it seems vaguely familiar?
[8] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.74 > Bachus | 27-Sep-03/5:13 PM | Reply
It's on my birth certificate.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > ?-Dave_Mysterious-? | 27-Sep-03/11:23 PM | Reply
Perhaps because, you left your brains at the Shamu tank.
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