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Goes the Spoils (Free verse) by <~>
Victor claps, palms askew, and his dirty white sneakers bounce in time. He sits at his table for one: a pitcher, a glass, and a pick. No ashtray. I won't offer him a smoke. Back up against the brick I watch him for an hour before I sit down next to him. He speaks only with himself, in Spanish, and will not notice me. The music, the music, the music. He knows every song, anticipates each end with his thick hands slapping out the denouement. Sometimes too soon--in the middle, when the band bridges for solos, so he fumbles an instant, rocks back in his parka and pours another Schaeffer from his pitcher. Eight dollars will last him all night, here at Cafe 9. The bartender knows him: says he's harmless. "Likes to come in when we're not busy and play his guitar. He's good." His stiffened fingers must have saved up all day to finesse that playing, maybe all week. And I came for the band. But the bartender knows me too. Next Tuesday, next Tuesday.


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Arithmetic Mean: 7.6363635
Weighted score: 6.318182
Overall Rank: 859
Posted: December 11, 2002 5:15 PM PST; Last modified: December 11, 2002 5:23 PM PST
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[8] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.106 | 11-Dec-02/5:28 PM | Reply
either you've done something here or I have an easy minds eye.
[n/a] <~> @ 67.84.171.10 > INTRANSIT | 11-Dec-02/5:32 PM | Reply
huh?
[8] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.77 > <~> | 11-Dec-02/5:34 PM | Reply
the long way of saying (good visuals)
[10] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 11-Dec-02/7:56 PM | Reply
speechless. it made me feel weird, and even more confused. who am i again.
[n/a] <~> @ 67.84.171.10 > Bachus | 11-Dec-02/8:14 PM | Reply
well, unless you're a homeless guy from new haven, you're not victor. but dave the bartender will spoil you. esp if you drink shaeffer. some how, i have to, there. it fits. and pints are only $2 on tuesday nights. cafe 9 is a crossroads. you never know who you'll meet there. ever.
[10] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > <~> | 11-Dec-02/8:17 PM | Reply
oh, i see...well as soon as i get a job i'll see for myself..
[n/a] <~> @ 67.84.171.10 > Bachus | 11-Dec-02/8:20 PM | Reply
well if you get a job in NY, i'll take you there, DOCTOR Bachus. (jumping the gun, maybe, but it feels so good to say it.) (and yale medical is right there, so you could shoot on location, and hang with dr. mark, and all the med students who find their way down to the nine. and we can go to pepe's pizza, on wooster street. granted, there are more yalies there than at my bar.)
[8] ecargo @ 208.249.92.99 > <~> | 12-Dec-02/12:20 PM | Reply
Pepe's is for tourists, you know that. Don't forget the Anchor on your downtown tour--play some Patsy on the jukebox for me and Paola. Visit Mr Hezekiah Gilbert under the Green, he
"who was educated at Yale College
Where he graduated 1783
An early Death terminated
His Studies & Literary Pursuits
and called him into Eternity."

And Tune Inn, but only if someone old school is playing and the bar's open. Alas, the Grotto. Ah, New Haven. Ah humanity.
[8] blkarak @ 198.85.27.92 | 16-Dec-02/9:36 AM | Reply
Interesting. I can see my own friends at far away, far awhen bars,from the time before when I still longed for raucous nights of confusion and soulful empathy.-8
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