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Ode to the Renesis

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Sep 2003 · Edited 26 Sep 2003 · 5 comments

Sing baby sing. Spin baby spin! Spin around the sun around the moon then back again! Spin laps across the sky with twin chambered might. Spin circles around those piston powered punks all day and all night. The tone of your voice can put me in a trance make me turn my head for more than a glance. It is sad to say I haven't got the green and must wait to see you in my trochoidal dreams.

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[6] FreeFormFixation 26-Sep-03/11:27 AM Reply
this is fun
[8] <~> 26-Sep-03/12:55 PM Reply
nice one.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › <~> 26-Sep-03/1:06 PM Reply
meh. thanks. with all the messes I have to fix, this will probably die.
[9] Bachus 26-Sep-03/1:30 PM Reply
Your time will arrive my friend. Sorry, about the Settle thing, he made me swear on the back of a square.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › Bachus 26-Sep-03/1:37 PM Reply
no prob. the best way to have friends... is to be one. i'm kosher. sometimes dill. mostly kosher.