Re: Simple Can (Relic) by Liver by Shardik	21-Sep-03/9:51 AM
I read this first thing this morning, and laughed hard has hell. Then, I thought, hey wait a minute... I wrote this? And LAUGHED EVEN HARDER.
Re: reflexion - dayspring to dusk (second version) by Don-Quixote	17-Sep-03/9:00 PM
One of your best. Tight, compact, significant. I'm proud of you.
Re: Scorpion feet lucky rabbit by horus8	17-Sep-03/5:15 PM
Ha ha ha whoever gave this a blue five is a lesbian vegetarian albanian cock ring of fire, and I didn't fall into.
Re: reflexion - dayspring to dusk by DreamerSupreme	17-Sep-03/11:44 AM
Interestinely
Re: a comment on Upside down and tigers by horus8	17-Sep-03/11:39 AM
Musk is obtained from the musk deer my friend, but all animals and people have their own smells and muskiness. And Pheremones are odorless to the nose but not the heart.
Re: Cyber Junkie by J.B. Manning	16-Sep-03/11:01 PM
Yep, but pray tell? What if I sold my knees last week for twenty five quail eggs and an omellette named 'what was that whistle'?
Re: naive gazer by richa	16-Sep-03/10:52 PM
That's a swell fever blister.
Re: a comment on Upside down and tigers by horus8	16-Sep-03/9:23 PM
I appologize that you had to see me get critical the other day. I hate doing that, but, believe me when I say 55% her weird wicked will, and 45% mine. bummer but shit happens. I'm glad you liked it, I was just getting back to simple writing again, but with more calibration.
Re: Manila by poetandknowit	16-Sep-03/8:21 PM
The End was a bit choppier for me than the rest, but I enjoyed it. 8.
Re: a comment on Upside down and tigers by horus8	16-Sep-03/7:03 PM
The ivory describes the color of the canine teeth and the tiger's blood splashed face and smile coming clean while drinking in the creek, but your note is cool and accurate also, thankyou.
Re: a comment on My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos	16-Sep-03/6:47 PM
She's not defamed just an illegal alien that should watch who she pokes her lit on in her writing forever. I'm just letting her know that she's not my friend, and I think she's a fucking cunt. secondly, i changed the title once, removing her name from the original title, making it as aloof as any of my other 300 poems on this site. this piece is no different than any other poetical assault I've ever pulled on others or that they've pulled on me... Except for the fact that this one ends a very good friendship. why you should pretend to give more of a shit than me makes you a shit that has no grasp behind what you are chirping about. You see I'm letter her know that i don't play fucking head trips popping over with people out of the blue and going hi this is my husband we have a sacred bond blee blah blue and expect me to play along especially because Patricia has a notorious habit of getting in to a guy for a while and completely blowing every one else off while somehow convincing herself that that is NORMAL. it's not, what is normal is for me to be a little weirded out by the whole thing and concerned. threfore it dawned on me why she had been having such guy problems which included even me in the past. Period. In other words why would she even bother to come over to my house inn the first place? Did she do that to everyone? What was she expecting me to do? How would she behave if I did that to her, and then dissappeared? and many more various question all of which are balanced upon the fact that she's illegal and that's what' been standing in her way. Because Tauruses and COWS GRAZE LAZILLY and blow shit off until it comes back to haunt them. Now obviously I would never turn her in or hurt her physically, but i want her to know that i shared my deep secrets with her yet she hid this from me like it was some sort of game. i don't like being used to make people jealous or as any item of leverage ever. period. I'm not one to fuck with. Period.
Re: Constant Penetration by William Delacroix	16-Sep-03/5:45 PM
Yes, so tired and bent they'd bend.
Re: a comment on My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos	16-Sep-03/5:32 PM
1. Because I'm not to be fucked with fairy. 2. because that's her fucking name. 3. She's a Judas and a lazy divider. 4. the damage done here doesn't exist because it's pathetically irrelevant because. A. With a wiz of research everyone already knows her name tart, it's been mentioned before. 5. I am reflection less, but nice try, you know what i tell you, and what you assume via your own past symbolic name labeling attempt at clarity... but you are wrong. you don't know her and you don't know me, but know this, I'm not to fucked with, and she knows that. I hate people that pretend to care about your demons and then use them against you, so she got her medicine because she struck out first and I am protected if you come at me first you will get back ten fold. i can only be bested passively and another way that you will never know. 6. The only thing ordinary here? Is you.
Re: a comment on Nicholas Martin's last great paper by Bachus	16-Sep-03/1:31 PM
F!) This essay is hardly average, granted it's not redefining anything we already don't know, but it's his last paper, and that's all I said. I didn't mention not one shred of anything similiar to all of the tripe you mentioned about me kissing his ass or anything like that. Which you just mechanically chirped through your vibrating duck neck above about me somehow putting more behind all of this than there is? I simply said last paper. Also, what have you got against hallucinogenic drugs by the way? Other than the fact that you are incapable of fully enjoying the benifit of a good creation based trip on mushrooms or peyote because you're handicapped and convinced you would not. You need a soft couch and a good hug my friend, I will pray for you. Do you not believe in me, as much as I believe in you?
Re: a comment on Nicholas Martin's last great paper by Bachus	16-Sep-03/1:20 PM
B. no more no less than normal, maybe a touch down, why? Are you? C. Don't say "whatever" because, it's just a horribly overused and lame word as of late, please, thank you. D. Rhode Island is the smallest state in the Union. One could piss across it from the top of one's house. Try the Encyclopedia sport! cheerio.
Re: a comment on Nicholas Martin's last great paper by Bachus	16-Sep-03/1:16 PM
A. Yes we are, and you know it, death is the transition into life. We haven't been born yet. Until we complete the Ten spheres. We have it all reversed, and that's why it eludes the modern mans mind, but believe me when I say, you are not alive yet. Anyway, enough with that nonsense since for now it's neither here nor there.
Re: a comment on Nicholas Martin's last great paper by Bachus	16-Sep-03/12:54 AM
YOu know as well as I do that us poemranker pure breeds are a dying breed, so why wouldn't you believe that Settle might be capable, or in fact did indeed, commit suicide? Life, my friend, is funny like that, even if you don't like to laugh. Here are your answers: A. Yes, aren't we all. B. I don't know. That's a good question. But bwetween me and you settle, and I, were closer than you'll ever know, and we still are. C. He had a thing for control? And Michael hutchinson. D. Please, as if Rhode Island is that big? How many schools could there be that would have enrolled such a loose canon as Settle in the first place. E. His Grandfather lives out here with his Step Grandmother in Bel air. He came out, we went to the Getty, and saw freddy vs. Jason, and the next day I have had him over for dinner? What is that too far fetched? It's the twenty first century and only a four hour flight you daft, not a "continent" We had carne asada, he was with a young jewish girl, but clearly gay and happy (with the food of course, and the cocktails) My son was even scared of him at first because he was very tall and... Well, weird, after all he's Hungarian, but then again so is my left foot on my mother's side, of the bed. I even drove him to the airport, though I was half asleep. The conversation was stimulating as can be expected, and we chortled and snipped about terrorism, and remote controlled jets carrying small nucleur devices. F. (is for finally) Because I loved him, and it deserves to be posted. I have it because he gave it to me, months ago, during one of our email conversations 'showing off' to me like usual, and I thought it should be read that's all. It's not like I plagarised it, or changed, and I gave him full credit, so why are you concerned, jealous? well, then, there you have it. You're excused.
Re: a comment on Wit and Eloquence by Lifeboatman	16-Sep-03/12:16 AM
Yes, I know and my reply 'was' once again, the elevated side and or 90 degree angle that juts down into the gutter from the side of the concrete path that pedestrians, whether wheel chaired, dog walking, or jogging upon, where i come from, is called a curb. The appropriate term by real maniacs like myself that really would do such a thing such as stomping on the back of ones head while the are biting the 'curb' is called a 'curbing' you fucking idiot. but, alas, i propose that indeed it would be exciting to see you actually stand let alone get violent. You are about as whole heartedly frightening as a dry piece of rice.
Re: a comment on My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos	15-Sep-03/4:58 PM
That's because it's not Jill! It's an assination of character. Great poetry is two ailes down and behind the dwarf with the ten inch black singing penis and jesus spelled backwards on his forehead(s).
Re: a comment on My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos	15-Sep-03/4:55 PM
Absolutely, one of my favourites.