poemranker ::Simple Can (Relic) by Liver by Shardik

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 66309

Simple Can (Relic) by Liver

Member since 2003 · Posted 20 Sep 2003 · 7 comments

I grimace at the old crusty label, All of Warhol's little "oh golly gees", Which silver wig will take the cable? From those who used to like my Can. They rarely try to eat me That sad dent and bulge on my lid. Give my sikness away universally From those who used to love my Can. Like Dino, Frank, Sammy, and Peter Lof-tan As I heat up through the winter, And continue to subject my Bochilism, To the creation of these noodled Cantors Because, they please me now and again. Since I'm still quite fond of my own Can. Jew know what I'm saying? I'm not praying? I'm just displaying. I'm straight up fucking poison. A subscription to calomine lotion A wicked witches potion, no devotion no motivation, just two spoons and a heel in a fork potato sealed container of borrowed tupperware labia recepticles. I will steadily hide the smell That my bacteria excretes to tell. the world I am a sick can Better opened under a ceiling fan. I won't weep on command Or beat the Republi-can's Bush. When a thought begins to swell within me I hypnotize the can opener to see that my deformed can holds a lovely pea. It takes those coincidences and libations Trapped there in my head and bottom. that imprison me in paper starvation A labeled can just like your shallow WOMB. They can't be destroyed or appeased As long as they've never been boiled. And that's a blessing to the beanbag you sit upon after i've soiled & diseased your ridiculous way of viewing your old can. Your poetry is a thing of the past. your way of writing and thinking is shit and when the Jelly fish fly by your window? Know that you are underwater and move on.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 6.50 weighted 6.32 rank 856 views 295 View voting details →

16 votes so far. Yours would make 17.16 votes so far

7 comments

[10] deleted user 20-Sep-03/9:15 PM Reply
Thank you for creating in me a clean heart.

Poison purge my shame.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> › deleted user 21-Sep-03/10:33 AM Reply
OLD CAN LOOK AT MY LIFE I'M A LOT LiKe YOU WERE.
[10] DreamerSupreme 20-Sep-03/9:23 PM Reply
and whats worse is his self pity
whining like some toddler
that i wish to beat silly

child protection laws and the knights
of respected dead farts be damned
i fucking wish the bastards bullshit
was self-respectfuly sealed and canned.
-----

Blessed with 10, as usual horus- your eyesight is sharp and misses little or nothing.

[10] baphomet 20-Sep-03/9:35 PM Reply
we are the knights who say kni

IO
[3] akidnamedkev 21-Sep-03/6:45 AM Reply
hahahahhahahhahahahaha
[10] Bachus 21-Sep-03/9:51 AM Reply
I read this first thing this morning, and laughed hard has hell. Then, I thought, hey wait a minute... I wrote this? And LAUGHED EVEN HARDER.
[1] deleted user 1-Oct-03/7:39 PM Reply
"I will steadily hide the smell
That my bacteria excretes to tell.
the world I am a sick can
Better opened under a ceiling fan."
Interesting.