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Scorpion feet lucky rabbit

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Sep 2003 · Edited 17 Sep 2003 · 4 comments

High desert love triangle will you fruit tree Can you spot me glacier & wind gusts Mountain meadows over dull yellow dunes To soons, goodbyes, rifles in each corner Turkish coffee Wearing my ruana Devil's tongue chile Mouthfuls of honey & mango preserves Even the dog knows better Then to nose poke a scorpion, but you see there is a brittle brown piece of plywood 30 yards from the front porch. Underneath it is a decomposing rabbit And a fat see through scorpion Poisonous, & barbed kisses full of babies. Heeled before it's time. Who said rabbit's feet were lucky?

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[n/a] Bachus 17-Sep-03/5:15 PM Reply

Ha ha ha whoever gave this a blue five is a lesbian vegetarian albanian cock ring of fire, and I didn't fall into.

[10] deleted user 17-Sep-03/7:06 PM Reply

I really liked this poem..
I am too afraid to tell you which line I liked best.

ah what the hell. it's your iceberg tip caught in my craw..

Devil's tongue chile
Mouthfuls of honey
& mango preserves

[9] DreamerSupreme 18-Sep-03/10:47 AM Reply

And a fat see through scorpion
Poisonous, & barbed kisses
full of babies.

-i had a crystal clear vision of the scorpion, and i like it.. i wish i could paint it and hang it on my wall, but im a poet because i couldnt draw worth a fuck.

btw, whats a ruana?

blessed with nine.

[n/a] horus8 › DreamerSupreme 18-Sep-03/12:28 PM Reply

It's a pancho from South America.