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Scorpion feet lucky rabbit (Free verse) by horus8
High desert love triangle
will you fruit tree
Can you spot me glacier & wind gusts
Mountain meadows over dull yellow dunes
To soons, goodbyes, rifles in each corner
Turkish coffee
Wearing my ruana
Devil's tongue chile
Mouthfuls of honey
& mango preserves
Even the dog knows better
Then to nose poke a scorpion,
but you see there is a brittle brown
piece of plywood 30 yards from the front
porch. Underneath it is a decomposing rabbit
And a fat see through scorpion
Poisonous, & barbed kisses
full of babies.
Heeled before it's time.
Who said rabbit's feet
were lucky?
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.9615383
Weighted score: 6.94841
Overall Rank: 168
Posted: September 17, 2003 2:01 PM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2003 2:11 PM PDT
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