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Manila (Free verse) by poetandknowit
Today, through the usual haze collecting
off the bay and undeniable stink of shanties
what is above remains clear. The streets
still reek of cheap business and squawk
with the buying and selling of the exotic dead,
fever red buses scream and fight to breathe along
the Romas inhaling black spit of hoary late models
too old but to creak with choking bicyclists and
rickshaws pedaling giddy tourists on goodwill jaunts
along the slithers and scattered patches of asphalt.
Today, the whores stay home and count blessings
while washing feet in buckets of dirty water, waiting
for the whistle and howl of calling boats, and
school children wrestle along hallways tugging weighted
backpacks filled with sketchbooks of home worked
attempts to pencil a heart on paper that beats
stronger than August typhoons.
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Weighted score: 5.2811766
Overall Rank: 3773
Posted: September 16, 2003 6:42 PM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2003 6:53 PM PDT
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