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Desire (Free verse) by revy13 Absorbing the need of lusting,
wanting bodies caressing,
massaging their taste to kill.
Tongues lashing sounds so intense
while melting away thoughts of nirvana.
Smelling ones temptations,
licking the other's soul away,
screaming one's pain,
taking the their breath inside
and suffering with inner serenity
Up the ladder:
Sacrificial Virgin
Down the ladder:
Bridges
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Posted: October 1, 2003 8:41 AM PDT; Last modified: October 2, 2003 9:29 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.928861 Overall Rank: 9147 Comments:
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
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1-Oct-03/4:04 PM
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suffering with inner serenity...lovely line. Not sure about the one before it though.
The last time I smelled a Temptation? he spun around splashing lukewarm jerry curl juice upon my naked buttocks. Naturally, I instantly climaxed in a heap of off Navy blue jelly and fuzzy toenail clipping pearljam to suck my thumb and coo. LIKE A REAL MAN in an unreal world full of hate and 7 elevens. I'm so sad so so damn sad *sniffle*.
You must be bored.
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