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Desire (Free verse) by revy13

Absorbing the need of lusting, wanting bodies caressing, massaging their taste to kill. Tongues lashing sounds so intense while melting away thoughts of nirvana. Smelling ones temptations, licking the other's soul away, screaming one's pain, taking the their breath inside and suffering with inner serenity

J.B. Manning 1-Oct-03/4:04 PM
suffering with inner serenity...lovely line. Not sure about the one before it though.




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