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Primal Reality (Free verse) by peaceseeker
"did you let
the dog out?"
he yelled
little lily,
going beserk
at the contented
cat, ironically
named "lucky"
who ate the
squirrel head
now it's
lily's turn
flipping the
headless body
this, her
ultimate reward
years spent
barking, chasing
earlier,
while harvesting
my first garden,
to dry
a friendly
squirrel, nearby
staring, silently
chattering a loving
curious squirrel
sniffing my
pile of flowers
impatiens,
petunias,
pansies
dusty miller,
flocks and hops
my overweight
neighbor
pulled in
the driveway
next door
asked if I'd
seen her puppy,
francis,
i told her
i just
saw him
in the
running pen
she said
the puppy escaped
oh my god, oh my god
while at
the bookstore
i scooped up
free dog treats
and gave them
to lily
in forgiveness
in the primal
reality of it all
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5833335
Weighted score: 6.1575093
Overall Rank: 1051
Posted: October 7, 2003 9:24 AM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2003 9:24 AM PDT
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neighbor
fucked my dog
in the ass
BUT THAT'S BECAUSE HE'S A FAT DOG FUCKER
LOL!!
LOLTTM!!!!!!!!
Have fun!!!!
Nice to meet you!!!!!111
Thanks!!!!!111111111
Bye!!!!!!!!!!!1111111