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Free verse № 68193

The man, the world

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Oct 2003 · 5 comments

A man, business man, hunter who, sitting in his high hide since he was born now forty-four and well sighted in on his prey decides the best thing he has ever done in his life he is doing right now. He decides not to shoot the buck. He then climbs down from natures skyscraper leans against the tree and dies.

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5 comments

[8] Druid_Girl_1984 3-Oct-03/12:25 PM Reply
cool i like this poem. -8-
[5] poetandknowit 3-Oct-03/12:35 PM Reply
natures skyscraper...

I like this (even without the apostrophe) and I was digging the poem until if flopped over and turned melodramatic. K.I.S.S.
[9] Bachus 3-Oct-03/12:51 PM Reply
ahaaahhaahahahah, feezus that was ahoot. 9.
[10] J.B. Manning 3-Oct-03/3:45 PM Reply
I think this is the best poem I've read on this yet to date. Honestly.
[10] J.B. Manning › J.B. Manning 6-Oct-03/10:52 AM Reply
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