| Re: Guess the place! by Patsy |
15-Aug-04/3:55 PM |
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Oops. Dilapidated. Anything else? i could find anything, so.
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| Re: Kept by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
11-May-04/12:02 AM |
i don't know, what kind of virgin runs with a point?
this tasted like the desert/dessert. yum.
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| Re: romance and chorus lines by unknown^user |
11-May-04/12:00 AM |
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i am taken in by your imagery and your self-assured-ness. (real word? don't know)
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| Re: a comment on Submission by Patsy |
5-Apr-04/7:46 PM |
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Well, that was kind of the point. So, thanks.
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| Re: The back of a shovel? by horus8 |
18-Jan-04/10:46 PM |
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| Re: Aspic by Shardik |
4-Nov-03/1:01 PM |
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Fascinating. As a vegetarian, i can't quite relate, but you certainly sexualize it...well.
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| Re: my stuff is like stuff by skaskowski |
4-Nov-03/1:00 PM |
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Owie! but good. imagery. mm.
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| Re: on a more positive note by calliope |
4-Nov-03/12:59 PM |
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is the title ironic, or are you a cynic?
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| Re: it's a new crayon by FreeFormFixation |
4-Nov-03/12:58 PM |
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like a love poem, only yes and only no.
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| Re: Nocturnal Emissions by EAger to Offend |
3-Nov-03/10:15 PM |
"I lick my plate
And meditate" won me over.
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| Re: The Redhead In The Subway by wolfen |
3-Nov-03/10:13 PM |
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it seems strange that such a...dirty...poem should rhyme. No matter, i like it.
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| Re: At least while you're gone, things get done. by Bachus |
3-Nov-03/10:12 PM |
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You have a creepy kind of foreboding tone, which, whether intentional or not, i savour.
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| Re: salt and celibacy by calliope |
15-Oct-03/3:20 PM |
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i like how it feels in my mouth.
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| Re: Horus's Musical Instrument of Torment by Y2kSlamPoet |
9-Oct-03/7:32 AM |
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Yes!Egyptian Mythology! Although it's probably about something else! Yes!
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| Re: Vest by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
6-Sep-03/11:18 AM |
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| Re: justly now included by A. Nomaly |
1-Sep-03/11:00 PM |
for some reason, i love love the fact that the spanish rhymes so well. Nicely done.
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| Re: Burning your desert down by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
30-Aug-03/3:22 PM |
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the second stanza, with the "none to see" didn't fit in my head, but the imagery is beautiful. the idea is beautiful.
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| Re: Molecular Parasitology Nerdcore Rap by Retaliate |
13-Aug-03/5:45 AM |
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Ha! i like it, if only because i'm still laughing.
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| Re: midnight, on a weekday by peaceseeker |
13-Aug-03/5:42 AM |
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i enojoy the amount of anxiety and the kind of tumbling of words that seems to come from having no breaks.
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