| Re: The Cereal Killer Blues by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
11-Aug-03/4:40 AM |
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I used to have a Fiat but it broke down on me more times than my ex
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| Re: He Looks Great In Lycra by GAY AS FU*K |
7-Aug-03/6:08 AM |
You have a talent for sucking at many things.
But it did make me laugh and spit my Coke on to the screen.
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| Re: Angel by mistaric |
7-Aug-03/6:03 AM |
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| Re: Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8 |
30-Jul-03/6:52 AM |
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| Re: I'll be your Gimp by GAY AS FU*K |
2-Jul-03/1:42 PM |
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I am sure your poems suck better than you do.
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| Re: Mirage by Wulf |
2-Jul-03/1:41 PM |
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This one has lots of potential but the formation of verse destroys the flow and its like a hybrid of 3 maybe 4 poems with conflicting points all over the place. 6
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| Re: The Gecko, and the Italian book collector by horus8 |
2-Jul-03/1:38 PM |
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Goodness me there seems to be a real homo theme going on tonight. This however (unlike our camp friend Gay As Fuck) is a more solid, fluid work. 8
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| Re: I wanna convert him by GAY AS FU*K |
2-Jul-03/1:37 PM |
Your so not gay, who are you really?
I know lots of gay men and I think your possibly in awe of them, married with no excitement maybe in your bedroom. (its quite funny though)
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| Re: Orbiting Venus by scitz |
2-Jul-03/1:35 PM |
Some choice lines in here and you avoid smut and instead employ decorum in your expression.
Its very good and i see you have paid homage to us ladies. 9
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| Re: Watching My Childhood Vanish by Caducus |
1-Jul-03/4:36 AM |
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Impressive ! moving yet quite funny in parts.
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| Re: Lake Pyramid's Secret by Bachus |
13-Jun-03/6:54 AM |
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| Re: Lake Pyramid's Secret by Bachus |
13-Jun-03/6:54 AM |
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I was rarely in class but I have stormed out of auditions once or twice. 7
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| Re: Dirge by Nicholas Jones |
13-Jun-03/6:21 AM |
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Nice enough but the punch you packed was short of winding me 7
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| Re: How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8 |
13-Jun-03/3:56 AM |
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Disgustingly enjoyable and witty. I will give you an 8 if you promise to seek therapy over these golden showers.
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| Re: A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig |
5-Jun-03/7:59 AM |
Teach me Mr Pig this is beautiful and I am beginning to think you must be a lady for you are in touch with the femimine aura.
Ten
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| Re: A Summers Day In Stolen Eden by Mr Pig |
27-May-03/3:36 PM |
Wonderful !
A myriad of images which you have condensed more so than the others. This reminds me of a Frost poem I read
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| Re: Love by simone_girard |
20-May-03/11:32 AM |
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reading this made me feel like I've eaten to many sweets. Far too immature and full of cliches, sorry its pants.
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| Re: The Order Of Things by Mr Pig |
20-May-03/11:29 AM |
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Beautifuly written, the attention to detail is astounding and I loved the message here and I think we miss it in our everyday lives, I love the way you write, are you married?
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| Re: may 18 by Bill Z Bub |
20-May-03/11:23 AM |
Bar a few there is some fine poems on the current entries today, this is no exception and the delivery of each line has a message and I loved it.
But do punks really sneer?
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| Re: Burst! by INTRANSIT |
20-May-03/11:20 AM |
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Beautifully enticing in its description, you have me wowed.8
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