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20 most recent comments by Mona Lisa
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Re: Inner-city parish by richa 18-Sep-03/7:36 AM
Nice to see a continuation of the church theme you write so enigmatically about.
Re: When old men die by <{Baba^Yaga}> 18-Sep-03/7:37 AM
Almost romantic yet always beautiful. Smooth as the scarf I'm wearing.
Re: Joshua by Bachus 18-Sep-03/7:44 AM
To die for
Re: save it from the age by abecedarian 18-Sep-03/7:45 AM
Definitely your best 10
Re: Last attempt at "My Father's Dreams" by Joe-joe 22-Sep-03/11:42 AM
not bad
regarding some deleted poem... 23-Oct-03/2:58 PM
2, I think not.




9
regarding some deleted poem... 12-Nov-03/4:22 AM
vivid and it offers a fresh angle (line 5 is cool)
Re: My Queen by heartlessempath 12-Nov-03/4:23 AM
Good to see a writer who is a benefit to this site
Re: My Love by baby_d 12-Nov-03/4:23 AM
Oh dear
Re: Mother Murder by horus8 12-Nov-03/4:25 AM
You go to my head like bollinger and strawberries horus8 - 8
Re: paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined 12-Nov-03/4:27 AM
Line 4 makes this.
regarding some deleted poem... 12-Nov-03/4:52 AM
non comprende
Re: A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus 19-Nov-03/1:35 AM
dynamite
regarding some deleted poem... 21-Jan-04/1:56 PM
Beatifully captures femininity
regarding some deleted poem... 3-Jun-04/10:51 AM
this depicts people and beautifies our behaviour and is not i think kitch in its descriptiion.

written with style.
regarding some deleted poem... 3-Jun-04/12:55 PM
likey
Re: Kangaroos by Bobjim 3-Jun-04/12:55 PM
grr
Re: Dealer (a senyru) by Mona Lisa 15-Jun-04/3:21 PM
5-7-5 structure like a haiku, but not of nature but of life.
Re: Ceylon Cries by Mona Lisa 3-Feb-05/4:32 AM
For those who dont know Sri Lanka is known as the teardrop of Allah for its shape looks like a tear.
Re: The cat who would fly by nentwined 12-Aug-05/9:01 AM
Line 6 just affects the whole thing. Otherwise its a peach.


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