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Ceylon Cries (Haiku) by Mona Lisa
Teardrop of Allah Cleansed by Mother Earth Which trembled in rage.

Down the ladder: Cat you cat

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6
Weighted score: 4.833116
Overall Rank: 10753
Posted: February 3, 2005 4:31 AM PST; Last modified: February 3, 2005 4:31 AM PST
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[n/a] Mona Lisa @ 172.212.126.101 | 3-Feb-05/4:32 AM | Reply
For those who dont know Sri Lanka is known as the teardrop of Allah for its shape looks like a tear.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.153.196.50 | 3-Feb-05/4:42 AM | Reply
Surely Allah's tears do not need cleansing? Unless you think they become sullied when a load of Sri Lankan's live on top of them. By God you're probably right :(
[8] wilco @ 24.165.207.93 | 3-Feb-05/3:48 PM | Reply
okay, I'll buy that.
[1] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 15-Feb-05/5:32 AM | Reply
Your Haiku series on current affairs continues to amaze!
Please do one on Charles and Camilla, my one is rubbish:

ears in a bridal
party, the synod ejects
equine betrothal.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.153.196.50 > Stephen Robins | 16-Feb-05/9:08 AM | Reply
There was an old duffer named Charles
Whose eyes were obscured by his jowls
He wandered off course
In pursuit of a horse
And proposed to Miss C. Parker Bow'ls :(
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