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Ceylon Cries (Haiku) by Mona Lisa Teardrop of Allah
Cleansed by Mother Earth
Which trembled in rage.
Up the ladder:
Elephant
Down the ladder:
the birds are bugs
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Posted: February 3, 2005 4:31 AM PST; Last modified: February 3, 2005 4:31 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.833116 Overall Rank: 10798 Comments:
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Mona Lisa @ 172.212.126.101
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3-Feb-05/4:32 AM
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For those who dont know Sri Lanka is known as the teardrop of Allah for its shape looks like a tear.
Surely Allah's tears do not need cleansing? Unless you think they become sullied when a load of Sri Lankan's live on top of them. By God you're probably right :(
okay, I'll buy that.
Your Haiku series on current affairs continues to amaze!
Please do one on Charles and Camilla, my one is rubbish: ears in a bridal party, the synod ejects equine betrothal.
There was an old duffer named Charles
Whose eyes were obscured by his jowls He wandered off course In pursuit of a horse And proposed to Miss C. Parker Bow'ls :( 181 view(s)
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