Alone

Member since 2003 · Posted 15 Sep 2003 · 2 comments

My wish and my folly Secretly my desire The hopes and dreams Swirling 'round your deity being My worthiness intangible My devoutness unsacred A love forever unspoken Eternally flaming Flawfully you exist within me Perfectly settled in your niche Circles of cloven wings flutter by A faceless entity living within your mist Your life and infinity Mean all the same to me A pointlessly meaningful death Entraps me in it's lair And you walk by unheedingly.

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[4] nentwined 15-Sep-03/6:41 AM Reply

I think the "big words" are trying too hard for something that's been said too much. Though "cloven wings" has me curious. ?

[5] Garrett S Sexton 15-Sep-03/2:21 PM Reply

I smell pixies. GOOD 5