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Alone (Free verse) by Artemis745
My wish and my folly
Secretly my desire
The hopes and dreams
Swirling 'round your deity being
My worthiness intangible
My devoutness unsacred
A love forever unspoken
Eternally flaming
Flawfully you exist within me
Perfectly settled in your niche
Circles of cloven wings flutter by
A faceless entity living within your mist
Your life and infinity
Mean all the same to me
A pointlessly meaningful death
Entraps me in it's lair
And you walk by unheedingly.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6
Weighted score: 4.833116
Overall Rank: 10800
Posted: September 15, 2003 6:32 AM PDT; Last modified: September 15, 2003 6:32 AM PDT
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