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heart & soul (Free verse) by crwncka1
deep in my heart, I feel this pain, through the chambers, I feel all four, empty spaces from within, no one is ever there, as i am all alone, by myself once again, though the dark of night, I hear the silence, though the thin air, closing in on me, my soul is all alone, but looking all around, for someone to love, it can't last forever, this dark eternal loneliness, as my soul will never, stop searching from within, for that someone special, the one I love dear

Up the ladder: Fighting erosion
Down the ladder: Alone

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6
Weighted score: 4.833116
Overall Rank: 10793
Posted: August 28, 2003 10:38 AM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2003 10:38 AM PDT
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[2] Don-Quixote @ 204.31.182.127 | 28-Aug-03/10:45 AM | Reply
... _sigh_ ... cmon now, this is one big cliche scrawled to torture me eyes...

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[10] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 12-May-04/2:47 AM | Reply
A festering phlegm-wod.
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