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Free verse № 74724

My Queen

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Nov 2003 · 6 comments

So prim and Proper, this Prize to be Sought after Princess’s ascension Some power growing, Must be strega Floating around in Diaphanous dresses Small joys to everyone She’s not the courtly boy They’d hoped for But she glides Effortlessly Across this Chessboard of intrigue She’s far less impressionable than steel Though her precarious control is so delicate that But one ill-rumor, error, or mistake And she’s sent to her chambers Quiet as a mouse And I’m sure she’s quite aware That every move, gesture, connotation and Inflection is calculated, ingenuine Though this one queen Ignores this with ease As she is passed, to dance With silent awareness of the Secret agendas of her Fawning partners And I know, quite Surely that I hate Myself for being her.

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6 comments

[7] richa 11-Nov-03/11:09 AM Reply
'That every move, gesture, connotation and
Inflection is calculated, ingenuine'

Interesting, seemed to stick out. So much of what we do is following patterns instinctually. Saying hello etc.
[n/a] heartlessempath › richa 11-Nov-03/11:11 AM Reply
saying hello back.

Thanks for the comment.
[8] Mona Lisa 12-Nov-03/4:23 AM Reply
Good to see a writer who is a benefit to this site
[2] horus8 12-Nov-03/11:30 AM Reply
Yeah, I hate you too.
[n/a] heartlessempath › horus8 12-Nov-03/3:54 PM Reply
Um. Pardon me? You hate a random person who only joined the site yesterday because.......?
[2] horus8 › heartlessempath 12-Nov-03/6:17 PM Reply
Because, I can tell from your mediocre titles, hopelessly trivial self analysis put to tiredly boring lyric, and buck teeth... that you are obviously EVIL! That's why, oh, welcome to the ranker Heart of Butterflies, or whatever in the fuck your EVIL name was.