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My Queen (Free verse) by heartlessempath
So prim and
Proper, this
Prize to be
Sought after
Princessâs ascension
Some power growing,
Must be strega
Floating around in
Diaphanous dresses
Small joys to everyone
Sheâs not the courtly boy
Theyâd hoped for
But she glides
Effortlessly
Across this
Chessboard of intrigue
Sheâs far less impressionable than steel
Though her precarious control is so delicate that
But one ill-rumor, error, or mistake
And sheâs sent to her chambers
Quiet as a mouse
And Iâm sure sheâs quite aware
That every move, gesture, connotation and
Inflection is calculated, ingenuine
Though this one queen
Ignores this with ease
As she is passed, to dance
With silent awareness of the
Secret agendas of her
Fawning partners
And I know, quite
Surely that I hate
Myself for being her.
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Posted: November 11, 2003 10:41 AM PST; Last modified: November 11, 2003 10:41 AM PST
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Inflection is calculated, ingenuine'
Interesting, seemed to stick out. So much of what we do is following patterns instinctually. Saying hello etc.
Thanks for the comment.