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drum circle (Other) by <~>
last night, the mountain went unmounted
we assembled in the hems of her skirts
while above, steely heads walled off the quickening sky,
piling higher,
squeezing tight the vault between jaws of a thundrous vise
we thought it unwise to climb her heights that night
and as crepusculation commenced
bright white broke tight above us
seeking shelter
the stonemason, the masseuse, the drummer,
the engineer, the horsewoman, the mothers,
the daughter, the dog, and me:
we lit the lanterns and candles
and scritched the cats
when they arched their backs
and wove between our knees,
until the trees grew quiet
and the rumbling ceased.
beneath the clearing eventide, we feasted.
strangers, acquaintances, and friends were here
to see, and partake
and perhaps awaken
something
with the threat now paled
(and the dinner plates cleared away)
we circled our seats around
a center was found, and silence descended
the drummer spoke, and told us
each to find our piece of rhythm,
to listen, and let it weave itself in
begin
and slapping,
tapping,
rapping,
clicking,
clacking
clapping
called back
to the silenced night sky
a boom struck hollow, again, again, and again atop the din.
on and on it went,
each seeking something
in the seething sound surrounding him
cacophony then conceded, condensed, and coalesced
conjoined, as one voice made of many:
warp and weft, naive and deft,
high and low, fast and slow,
on it pulsed, out it flowed
and as before, the thunder faded
the hymn was ending
we seemed to know
though no one spoke it
and as the last clap tapped at taut drawn skin,
our eyes were raised in unison
and silence
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6153846
Weighted score: 6.1809406
Overall Rank: 1010
Posted: August 7, 2002 10:14 AM PDT; Last modified: August 7, 2002 10:14 AM PDT
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