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Velvetted (Free verse) by knickytoy Hold still now.
Close your eyes.
This won't hurt a bit,
trust me, and stop laughing;
Not all girls want to stomp on you boys.
There, didn't even bleed
and now you won't be poking me
with those damn things
or make holes in my headboard.
Come with me now
and look in the mirror.
See what I've always seen:
An adorable gentle man
whom I never thought of as only horny.
Now pucker up and kiss me.
Up the ladder:
drum circle
Down the ladder:
Acoustic
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Posted: September 25, 2002 1:27 PM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2002 1:27 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.1809406 Overall Rank: 1011 Comments:
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25-Sep-02/1:42 PM
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ouch!!!! nasty knicky! treating satyrs so sadistically. trophy wife.
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knickytoy @ 24.45.19.89
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25-Sep-02/1:46 PM
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I am dehorning a cukold, but I like how it can read many ways.\
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Tintagiles @ 207.179.137.170
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25-Sep-02/5:18 PM
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Dehorning a cuckold. I confess I've never heard of anyone managing to do that. It's funny.
He'll not be horny again dear.
This is both funny and sexy. Love it. I'm looking forward to your poem about cheese.
very odd, nice. can't remember the last time i had sex with a deer (or the devil), but it was HOT. there is something almost soothing about this, but it's creepy at the same time. not sure i've read anything like it.
Well peaches, somehow I overlooked this one. "didn't even bleed " threw me off a bit, but the title helped. Very clever. The last 3 lines are beautiful.
Thanks Mrs.G.??
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