poemranker ::Inner-city parish by richa

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Free verse № 65676

Inner-city parish

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Sep 2003 · Edited 18 Sep 2003 · 3 comments

The terraces line the road like bricks. Eighteen feet high and gunmetal grey dug into the earth like shrapnell shells. Two blocks and a field away bells of a church, and later the vicar between his first and second sermon will bless with bread and communion wine his flock with ever increasing speed. It has become a measure of his belief.

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3 comments

[8] Mona Lisa 18-Sep-03/7:36 AM Reply
Nice to see a continuation of the church theme you write so enigmatically about.
[9] <~> 18-Sep-03/8:53 AM Reply
nice job.
[10] god'swife 18-Sep-03/10:57 AM Reply
This is great! Anyone who wants to understand how image imparts meaning, and the emotion the poet is trying to express, should take a look at this poem. You stay right with the metaphor throughout, well done.