| Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina |
8-Nov-05/8:25 AM |
Ahh come on this is no way crap none of us admit to being elitist we just do our best.
We're all training here and who knows maybe an apprentice can become a master.
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| Re: The cat who would fly by nentwined |
12-Aug-05/9:01 AM |
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Line 6 just affects the whole thing. Otherwise its a peach.
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| Re: a comment on Baghdad Election by Mona Lisa |
11-Feb-05/8:55 AM |
With your grasp of understanding race Stephen you should run for President, you'll probably be elected.
Did you watch Fahrenheit 9/11 or do you repudiate facts from that too?
PS your comment did not annoy me but your mother does for conceiving such an arrogant and conceited little twat.
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| Re: Ceylon Cries by Mona Lisa |
3-Feb-05/4:32 AM |
For those who dont know Sri Lanka is known as the teardrop of Allah for its shape looks like a tear.
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| Re: a comment on Baghdad Election by Mona Lisa |
2-Feb-05/5:13 AM |
Stephen you have made no secret of your dislike for my work which is fine. I do however think voting this a 1 is futile why not just change it to a zero? Also do you actually understand it.
Purple fingers = voters
Caddy's is dual meaning a) golf which our braindead Mr Bush likes to play and b) his political allies such as Blair.
Admit it, you understand this as much as men understand women? As my Mother used to tell me - men with big pricks act big pricks
So which one are you? big boy or weener boy?
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| Re: a comment on Paedophile at st catherine's by Mona Lisa |
26-Jan-05/6:46 AM |
Stephen you are such a knob jockey
1) Sindy dolls is with an S not a C
2) If you actually put the same amount of thought into your critique as I did writing this then your comment would be worth taking seriously.
3) Reading your poetry is like wading through muck.
Good day to you.
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| Re: Dealer (a senyru) by Mona Lisa |
15-Jun-04/3:21 PM |
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5-7-5 structure like a haiku, but not of nature but of life.
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| Re: Kangaroos by Bobjim |
3-Jun-04/12:55 PM |
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| Re: A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus |
19-Nov-03/1:35 AM |
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| Re: paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined |
12-Nov-03/4:27 AM |
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| Re: Mother Murder by horus8 |
12-Nov-03/4:25 AM |
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You go to my head like bollinger and strawberries horus8 - 8
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| Re: My Love by baby_d |
12-Nov-03/4:23 AM |
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| Re: My Queen by heartlessempath |
12-Nov-03/4:23 AM |
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Good to see a writer who is a benefit to this site
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| Re: Last attempt at "My Father's Dreams" by Joe-joe |
22-Sep-03/11:42 AM |
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| Re: save it from the age by abecedarian |
18-Sep-03/7:45 AM |
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| Re: Joshua by Bachus |
18-Sep-03/7:44 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Man & Woman by Mona Lisa |
18-Sep-03/7:42 AM |
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Out by 1 syl on line 3 have u any ideas?
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| Re: When old men die by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
18-Sep-03/7:37 AM |
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Almost romantic yet always beautiful. Smooth as the scarf I'm wearing.
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| Re: Inner-city parish by richa |
18-Sep-03/7:36 AM |
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Nice to see a continuation of the church theme you write so enigmatically about.
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| Re: a comment on The Adulterous by Caducus |
11-Aug-03/9:14 AM |
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Its not its a Haiku, Haiku's have a succinct nature of syllables in a format of 3 lines with 5 syl 7 syl and 5 syl
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