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Mother Murder (Free verse) by horus8
Under the coffee table you dropped and rolled off into another dimension. I imagine you often, forgotten there. Next to a chewed up lego and pen cap. Peering out at the idea of recovery. The clean light of another maybe now. Can you hear the morning news and drip of go go juice going away without you missed upon the backs of boxed cowings. And fully capable of going bad at will. If you see her wave When you can, then do If you spot her pray Old mother's brand new. Toasters, blenders & microwaved mind benders. Refrigerating dinners and power ball winners. Check the mail twice today, and be that okay With how you can switch channels and still pay back in slippers, Weight watchers, and flannel The mother of all best kept secrets has passed. Between your last sick day, and her hot flash.

Down the ladder: Joshua

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.1764708
Weighted score: 6.917029
Overall Rank: 210
Posted: November 10, 2003 3:02 AM PST; Last modified: November 10, 2003 3:02 AM PST
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Comments:
[4] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 | 10-Nov-03/6:39 AM | Reply
Started out great but it somehow became stale - wonder how:o(
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 > ShaNoN+960317485 | 10-Nov-03/9:26 AM | Reply
Men-o-pause?
[4] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 | 10-Nov-03/10:40 AM | Reply
I can't get past the fact that it's blatant rip-off of "on top of old smokey".

Poor meatball.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 > Shuushin | 10-Nov-03/4:19 PM | Reply
So's the Canadian Anthem, but you don't see the maples laughing do you? Also I tried, but I couldn't get it to fit your assumption. Therefore,that must have been your attempt at humor. Forgive me for hurling ketchup at you.
[4] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 > horus8 | 10-Nov-03/7:45 PM | Reply
What did you try, exactly? As for the ketchup, you could have at least taken it out of the little packets first.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 > Shuushin | 10-Nov-03/9:35 PM | Reply
Don't you know a condom packet when your hit with one?
[8] Mona Lisa @ 62.105.119.105 | 12-Nov-03/4:25 AM | Reply
You go to my head like bollinger and strawberries horus8 - 8
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 > Mona Lisa | 17-Nov-03/3:39 PM | Reply
Like wise I'm sure. Do you have a picture, so I might see where it is I'm going too?
[4] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 > horus8 | 17-Nov-03/3:46 PM | Reply
ask scitz, or Caducus.... they might lend you one.
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