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save it from the age (Free verse) by abecedarian
invisible cities crawl past sleeping ages
and in an eye's lit glimmer of recollection
we sense home and break down the door
to find a rotting cottage of pots and pans
and a stained mattress
but moving beside the bed
under a creaking board
packed knowingly away
(to save it from the age)
is a name given to thoughts
that remind us of something we ought to know
but can't remember
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.107143
Weighted score: 6.1044054
Overall Rank: 1127
Posted: July 11, 2002 8:00 PM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2002 8:00 PM PDT
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