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save it from the age (Free verse) by abecedarian

invisible cities crawl past sleeping ages and in an eye's lit glimmer of recollection we sense home and break down the door to find a rotting cottage of pots and pans and a stained mattress but moving beside the bed under a creaking board packed knowingly away (to save it from the age) is a name given to thoughts that remind us of something we ought to know but can't remember

horus8 30-Oct-02/5:41 PM
manly p. hall? the secret teachings of all ages...would eleviate that boards creak, or make it louder in time i think...i don't remember maybe both. you're getting lots of swell votes..take a look.B




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