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The Adulterous (Haiku) by Caducus Lust leads wayward souls,
âTHOU SHALT NOT COMMITT ADULTERY'
But we are not Christ.
Up the ladder:
quickie
Down the ladder:
Child of my Buttocks
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Posted: April 1, 2003 2:58 AM PST; Last modified: April 1, 2003 3:34 AM PSTWeighted score: 6.6043353 Overall Rank: 598 Comments:
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maffy @ 62.105.88.10
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1-Apr-03/4:17 AM
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Impressive.
Does that mean I'm free to covet my neighbour's ass? Even though it looks terrible in those polyester slacks?
You just interrupted my comment Mr Christof but I'll let it go this time. By the way lycra's all the rage where I am from at the moment.
I wear it with glee
Very sorry, it's rude of me to interrupt. Do you find your ass is much coveted as a result?
I wear my lycra with glue, by the way, stops it slipping.
I wear mine with glue its fish smelling glue and when it dries it turns to cheese.
Thats gross man, now gentlemen PLEASE, your making me wanna puke.
Join me and Mr Robins and write about cocks and things. Very good but Mr C I must protest in all seriousness
I prefer to protest in all facetiousness
we may not be Christ, but its safe to say that every-so-often i am God.
More of a statement than a haiku. I suggest a good read of the form and its purpose. No put the Nora Roberts book down! Now!
I think the last line is wonderful. They are not easy these darned Haiku's. I see there is still no love lost between you and poetanknowit.
Jesus loves a sinner?
how is that a poem?
Its not its a Haiku, Haiku's have a succinct nature of syllables in a format of 3 lines with 5 syl 7 syl and 5 syl
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