The Adulterous

by Caducus

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Apr 2003 · Edited 1 Apr 2003 · 15 comments

Lust leads wayward souls, âTHOU SHALT NOT COMMITT ADULTERY' But we are not Christ.

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[9] maffy 1-Apr-03/4:17 AM Reply

Impressive.

[n/a] Christof 1-Apr-03/7:35 AM Reply

Does that mean I'm free to covet my neighbour's ass? Even though it looks terrible in those polyester slacks?

[9] spank me baby yeah › Christof 1-Apr-03/7:37 AM Reply

You just interrupted my comment Mr Christof but I'll let it go this time. By the way lycra's all the rage where I am from at the moment.

I wear it with glee

[n/a] Christof › spank me baby yeah 1-Apr-03/7:39 AM Reply

Very sorry, it's rude of me to interrupt. Do you find your ass is much coveted as a result?

[n/a] Christof › Christof 1-Apr-03/7:39 AM Reply

I wear my lycra with glue, by the way, stops it slipping.

[9] spank me baby yeah › Christof 1-Apr-03/7:42 AM Reply

I wear mine with glue its fish smelling glue and when it dries it turns to cheese.

[n/a] Caducus › spank me baby yeah 1-Apr-03/7:43 AM Reply

Thats gross man, now gentlemen PLEASE, your making me wanna puke.

[9] spank me baby yeah 1-Apr-03/7:35 AM Reply

Join me and Mr Robins and write about cocks and things. Very good but Mr C I must protest in all seriousness

[n/a] Christof › spank me baby yeah 1-Apr-03/7:37 AM Reply

I prefer to protest in all facetiousness

[9] brazen 1-Apr-03/8:39 AM Reply

we may not be Christ, but its safe to say that every-so-often i am God.

[0] poetandknowit 1-Apr-03/10:12 AM Reply

More of a statement than a haiku. I suggest a good read of the form and its purpose. No put the Nora Roberts book down! Now!

[10] Mr Pig (again) 1-Apr-03/10:26 AM Reply

I think the last line is wonderful. They are not easy these darned Haiku's. I see there is still no love lost between you and poetanknowit.

[4] Garrett S Sexton 1-Apr-03/1:44 PM Reply

Jesus loves a sinner?

[7] Hostileintent 11-Aug-03/7:09 AM Reply

how is that a poem?

[10] Mona Lisa › Hostileintent 11-Aug-03/9:14 AM Reply

Its not its a Haiku, Haiku's have a succinct nature of syllables in a format of 3 lines with 5 syl 7 syl and 5 syl