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The Adulterous (Haiku) by Caducus
Lust leads wayward souls, ‘THOU SHALT NOT COMMITT ADULTERY' But we are not Christ.

Up the ladder: quickie
Down the ladder: Child of my Buttocks

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6842103
Weighted score: 6.6043353
Overall Rank: 598
Posted: April 1, 2003 2:58 AM PST; Last modified: April 1, 2003 3:34 AM PST
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[9] maffy @ 62.105.88.10 | 1-Apr-03/4:17 AM | Reply
Impressive.
[n/a] Christof @ 217.44.71.200 | 1-Apr-03/7:35 AM | Reply
Does that mean I'm free to covet my neighbour's ass? Even though it looks terrible in those polyester slacks?
[9] spank me baby yeah @ 62.105.88.10 > Christof | 1-Apr-03/7:37 AM | Reply
You just interrupted my comment Mr Christof but I'll let it go this time. By the way lycra's all the rage where I am from at the moment.

I wear it with glee
[n/a] Christof @ 217.44.71.200 > spank me baby yeah | 1-Apr-03/7:39 AM | Reply
Very sorry, it's rude of me to interrupt. Do you find your ass is much coveted as a result?
[n/a] Christof @ 217.44.71.200 > Christof | 1-Apr-03/7:39 AM | Reply
I wear my lycra with glue, by the way, stops it slipping.
[9] spank me baby yeah @ 62.105.88.10 > Christof | 1-Apr-03/7:42 AM | Reply
I wear mine with glue its fish smelling glue and when it dries it turns to cheese.
[n/a] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 > spank me baby yeah | 1-Apr-03/7:43 AM | Reply
Thats gross man, now gentlemen PLEASE, your making me wanna puke.
[9] spank me baby yeah @ 62.105.88.10 | 1-Apr-03/7:35 AM | Reply
Join me and Mr Robins and write about cocks and things. Very good but Mr C I must protest in all seriousness
[n/a] Christof @ 217.44.71.200 > spank me baby yeah | 1-Apr-03/7:37 AM | Reply
I prefer to protest in all facetiousness
[9] brazen @ 68.84.225.163 | 1-Apr-03/8:39 AM | Reply
we may not be Christ, but its safe to say that every-so-often i am God.
[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.212.135 | 1-Apr-03/10:12 AM | Reply
More of a statement than a haiku. I suggest a good read of the form and its purpose. No put the Nora Roberts book down! Now!
[10] Mr Pig (again) @ 195.92.194.16 | 1-Apr-03/10:26 AM | Reply
I think the last line is wonderful. They are not easy these darned Haiku's. I see there is still no love lost between you and poetanknowit.
[4] Garrett S Sexton @ 213.122.117.88 | 1-Apr-03/1:44 PM | Reply
Jesus loves a sinner?
[7] Hostileintent @ 159.134.55.183 | 11-Aug-03/7:09 AM | Reply
how is that a poem?
[10] Mona Lisa @ 62.105.119.105 > Hostileintent | 11-Aug-03/9:14 AM | Reply
Its not its a Haiku, Haiku's have a succinct nature of syllables in a format of 3 lines with 5 syl 7 syl and 5 syl
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