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quickie (Free verse) by <~> ~
rile
roll
roil
tug
toll
toil
shrug
smear
smile
yours
mine
coil
wet
sweat
I'll
let
you
do that
to
me
any
time...
Up the ladder:
Instructions to a Sculptor
Down the ladder:
The Adulterous
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.6363635
Posted: September 19, 2002 11:16 AM PDT; Last modified: September 19, 2002 12:33 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.6069317 Overall Rank: 597 Comments:
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Frass @ 138.88.0.94
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19-Sep-02/6:16 PM
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Methinks you have a libido; nice work.
rarr! =)
looks like a drunk peeing in the snow you purring little cloud leopard you...hi z..!! missing you! can't wait to finish up this play..so much fucking rehearsal it's cutting into my ranking time...im just a bit perturbed...bastards..can you believe someone...hmm.hmm. labled some of bachus' poems stolen..hah! i know that piker and his hoof might be bitter, but he still has fucking pride...bastards wish they could dismiss him that easy..i know he's not one for ass kissing but jesus, to rewrite someone elses work is totally pathetic(cutting out and pasting is different, but only if it's darkangels&company and going in the bachus tribunal) can you imagine...of course they would never accuse you of that..so do me a favor..flip them off for bachus' and "for my friends"!!!!
hiya h. yep. you and me are keeping different hours these days...so, you liked this one, didja? heheheheh...
Slinky as a snake in grease. Another poem to use the word 'tug' - poemranker is obsessed.
six poems and one user with the word "tug". not *that* obsessed.
Maybe I just gravitate to the word 'tug'. Perhaps it is I who am obsessed.
All good poems use the word 'tug.' The more the better. NINE.
i confess: the preponderance of talk of tugging got my bits a-churning... :\
I'm not surprised. It's in the air I tell you.
This poem is tempting, intriguing--like its author
Who gave this a zero? Are you dead? Writer of triangle poems could make a "dead man come" with this poem, so you (and you know who you are) might just be foolish. The style is as fun as the act. Off to the shower.
(psst--he's a eunuch. he's just pissed, is all.)
It's good but it's not the one.
thanks. it was just a quickie, after all. and sometimes, that's exactly what you need, know what i mean?
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