quickie

by <~>

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Sep 2002 · Edited 19 Sep 2002 · 15 comments

~ rile roll roil tug toll toil shrug smear smile yours mine coil wet sweat I'll let you do that to me any time...

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15 comments

[8] Frass 19-Sep-02/6:16 PM Reply

Methinks you have a libido; nice work.

[9] nentwined 19-Sep-02/11:38 PM Reply

rarr! =)

[8] horus8 20-Sep-02/12:11 AM Reply

looks like a drunk peeing in the snow you purring little cloud leopard you...hi z..!! missing you! can't wait to finish up this play..so much fucking rehearsal it's cutting into my ranking time...im just a bit perturbed...bastards..can you believe someone...hmm.hmm. labled some of bachus' poems stolen..hah! i know that piker and his hoof might be bitter, but he still has fucking pride...bastards wish they could dismiss him that easy..i know he's not one for ass kissing but jesus, to rewrite someone elses work is totally pathetic(cutting out and pasting is different, but only if it's darkangels&company and going in the bachus tribunal) can you imagine...of course they would never accuse you of that..so do me a favor..flip them off for bachus' and "for my friends"!!!!

[n/a] <~> › horus8 20-Sep-02/3:25 PM Reply

hiya h. yep. you and me are keeping different hours these days...so, you liked this one, didja? heheheheh...

[8] Christof 20-Sep-02/1:12 AM Reply

Slinky as a snake in grease. Another poem to use the word 'tug' - poemranker is obsessed.

[9] nentwined › Christof 20-Sep-02/3:47 AM Reply

six poems and one user with the word "tug". not *that* obsessed.

[8] Christof › nentwined 20-Sep-02/4:08 AM Reply

Maybe I just gravitate to the word 'tug'. Perhaps it is I who am obsessed.

[9] waltfreakinwhitman › Christof 20-Sep-02/2:53 PM Reply

All good poems use the word 'tug.' The more the better. NINE.

[n/a] <~> › Christof 20-Sep-02/5:47 AM Reply

i confess: the preponderance of talk of tugging got my bits a-churning... :\

[8] Christof › <~> 20-Sep-02/5:51 AM Reply

I'm not surprised. It's in the air I tell you.

[n/a] royalflesh 20-Sep-02/11:19 PM Reply

This poem is tempting, intriguing--like its author

[8] poetandknowit 24-Sep-02/10:19 PM Reply

Who gave this a zero? Are you dead? Writer of triangle poems could make a "dead man come" with this poem, so you (and you know who you are) might just be foolish. The style is as fun as the act. Off to the shower.

[n/a] <~> › poetandknowit 24-Sep-02/10:52 PM Reply

(psst--he's a eunuch. he's just pissed, is all.)

[0] Tom Colebrooke 14-Oct-02/7:51 AM Reply

It's good but it's not the one.

[n/a] <~> › Tom Colebrooke 14-Oct-02/7:56 AM Reply

thanks. it was just a quickie, after all. and sometimes, that's exactly what you need, know what i mean?