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~ rile roll roil tug toll toil shrug smear smile yours mine coil wet sweat I'll let you do that to me any time...

poetandknowit 24-Sep-02/10:19 PM
Who gave this a zero? Are you dead? Writer of triangle poems could make a "dead man come" with this poem, so you (and you know who you are) might just be foolish. The style is as fun as the act. Off to the shower.




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