Free verse № 54790
Orbiting Venus
Lay down low,
Close your eyes and relax,
Iâll let my fingers flow,
just let these moments pass.
You smile seductively,
Like your bodyâs instructing me,
To tease it, bite it,
Please and delight it,
And I will kiss you outside and in,
In a riot of lip dragging movements,
Upon tepid brined skin.
You bite your bottom lip,
And drag at the hem of the sheets,
As it gets more intense they rip,
And I harshly rub your face with my palms,
Hoist your lower half up in my arms,
Opening your aroused Venus with my lips,,
Are like citrus clouds when the orange peel rips,
The flesh of forbidden fruit caramelizing my tongue,
And I will love you from dusk,
To the larks morning song.
4 comments
"upon tepid brined skin."
tepid is like..less hot...moderately warm...lacking in passion. did you say it like that?
and brined....are u meaning salty?
good poem tho
One thing
Lark's
Its very good and i see you have paid homage to us ladies. 9
not entirely unpornographic though
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