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Company 11 (a friendly fire agency) (Villanelle) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
Can you not see I am an embedded ass-shot, red hot quilled porcupine? Until Saddam Hussein is beheaded. Why is my skull now perforated? Blood comes out with turpentine. Can you not see I am an embedded? The moment all CNN affiliates have dreaded. (I think I'll snort this fat [coke] line.) Until Saddam Hussein is beheaded. Will this war , as a holiday, be celebrated? (I think while jacking smack on my porcelaine shrine.) Can you not see I am an embedded? Must everything be so impersonated? (I borrowed this thought, it was never mine.) Until Saddam Hussein is beheaded. Fuck, while I was talking, my Scotch evaporated. Eight plus one minus zero is nine. Must everything be so impersonated? Will this war , as a holiday, be celebrated?

Up the ladder: joyriding
Down the ladder: Orbiting Venus

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.3333335
Weighted score: 6.1666665
Overall Rank: 1028
Posted: April 8, 2003 7:18 PM PDT; Last modified: April 8, 2003 7:18 PM PDT
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Comments:
[7] Ranger @ 213.120.56.37 | 9-Apr-03/11:31 AM | Reply
Interesting, certainly. Funny to a very limited extent. Um, check some of the rhyme. Probably a 7 for now.
[10] suckmychucks @ 64.41.22.90 | 10-Apr-03/1:42 PM | Reply
rock on, baba. rock on.
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