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Free verse № 52689

Lake Pyramid's Secret

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Jun 2003 · Edited 23 Jul 2003 · 6 comments

Playing hooky from school in Reno It's a hell of a haul to get out there, but worth the schlep. Because, behind those pyramids bubble the hot springs. Where local college sororities do 'most' of their 'specialized' rituals amidst those steaming pools & and sulphur coated shrubs, rocks, and bird's-nests. We would pass off that we were local boys (My friend Tony was Indian), and though only in 7th. grade. We all had very clear ideas about what we were doing there. Getting familiar with Eve. Watching, waiting, learning. I have never fallen in love so repeatedly any-where else, since, but I have loved some of the best, and all of the worst Instincually accident prone. I guess I'm afraid to be alone. A few times I got lucky out there. A very lustfully arousing young lady would insist I cop a feel, and I felt, and I felt, until I discovered that place. Between everything, To climb back into. When I could not deal with whatever I imagined was worth escaping. Pandora's box is sideless. I imagined too much. I wonder now, where I am, as I sit. If maybe, I could go back there and drown- rinse-burn that familiarity off of me, once, and for all.

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6 comments

[10] INTRANSIT 12-Jun-03/6:43 PM Reply
I remember when I used to do that.lol.
[8] Mona Lisa 13-Jun-03/6:54 AM Reply
I was rarely in class but I have stormed out of auditions once or twice. 7
[n/a] Bachus › Mona Lisa 23-Jul-03/3:38 PM Reply
Help me imagine that. Can you clarify? I like auditions, they keep me wary of just how low it all goes, but occasionally it pays off.
[8] Mona Lisa 13-Jun-03/6:54 AM Reply
oops 8
[10] INTRANSIT 15-Jun-03/8:32 AM Reply
My otra comment is lost, and should go back to whenceforth it came. Keee-lar.
[9] DreamerSupreme 24-Jul-03/6:22 AM Reply
nice. 9.