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on missing the bus (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub
Sometimes I tire of being the man on the corner, waiting. the man in the city, by the side of the street, sore feet pacing in sneaky circles. muttering. muttering. There's no choice but to fall back, shoulder wedged into the weathered texture of Maple. I surrender to the green grass, and the hordes of roaring dandelion, and just rest my eyes. for a time.

Down the ladder: Lake Pyramid's Secret

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.625
Weighted score: 5.7059712
Overall Rank: 1899
Posted: May 19, 2003 7:28 PM PDT; Last modified: May 19, 2003 7:28 PM PDT
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[10] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.102 | 19-May-03/7:32 PM | Reply
boy, when you come back, you come BACK!
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 > INTRANSIT | 19-May-03/7:55 PM | Reply
I thank you, and raise a glass of Stella Artois to ya. Cheers.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 19-May-03/8:04 PM | Reply
A requisition immaculate.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 20-May-03/7:07 PM | Reply
Yes. (?)
[9] deleted user @ 63.237.171.111 | 20-May-03/12:38 PM | Reply
you really conveyed the hope\helplessness and the uselessness of the emptiness in this guys soul.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 > deleted user | 20-May-03/7:25 PM | Reply
Thanks. Can you play "Don't Stop Believin'"? :D
[10] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 20-May-03/3:37 PM | Reply
Dude I'll have you know I am to Billy Crudup what modeling is to dark angel. lol. here's at-ten-tion.
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