poemranker ::on missing the bus by Bill Z Bub

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Free verse № 49521

on missing the bus

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 May 2003 · 7 comments

Sometimes I tire of being the man on the corner, waiting. the man in the city, by the side of the street, sore feet pacing in sneaky circles. muttering. muttering. There's no choice but to fall back, shoulder wedged into the weathered texture of Maple. I surrender to the green grass, and the hordes of roaring dandelion, and just rest my eyes. for a time.

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[10] INTRANSIT 19-May-03/7:32 PM Reply
boy, when you come back, you come BACK!
[n/a] Bill Z Bub › INTRANSIT 19-May-03/7:55 PM Reply
I thank you, and raise a glass of Stella Artois to ya. Cheers.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> 19-May-03/8:04 PM Reply
A requisition immaculate.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub › <{Baba^Yaga}> 20-May-03/7:07 PM Reply
Yes. (?)
[9] deleted user 20-May-03/12:38 PM Reply
you really conveyed the hope\helplessness and the uselessness of the emptiness in this guys soul.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub › deleted user 20-May-03/7:25 PM Reply
Thanks. Can you play "Don't Stop Believin'"? :D
[10] Shardik 20-May-03/3:37 PM Reply
Dude I'll have you know I am to Billy Crudup what modeling is to dark angel. lol. here's at-ten-tion.