Free verse № 51690
A Moment In Nowhere
Somewhere in the midst of nowhere,
Somebody stole me for a while,
By a broken down rusty beetle,
Was a woman breaking down,
Blackened in wet mascara she smiled at me,
I walked over trying to do so nonchalantly.
âHave you got a spare Marlboro she askedâ
âYesâ I vehemently said in a blue montage,
And gave her mine half-baked like the tarmac.
Her accent was a symphony of Gaelic silk,
That echoed on the fringes of cross winds,
I stared at her mouth and smiling she looked away,
She presented conversation like a guilty bouquet.
I asked why she was crying,
And she pointed to the roadside,
There were torn photographs of a bride and groom,
That blew around like cursed confetti,
She spat and impaled the memories on her stilettoâs,
Shouting all men are pigs, all men are pigs,
I became an inappropriate pillow for her sufferance,
Her flaxen locks smelled of pear drops,
And I wanted this moment frozen.
We talked for hours on the embankment,
Amongst the flowers it was enchanted,
I thought how a moment is so much sweeter than longevity,
We then parted,
and sweetly kissed as we went our separate ways,
And we spent a sweet moment together,
Instead of the asphyxiation of the rest our days.
written: 17th May 2003 near Mousehole, Cornwall.
17 comments
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Your a show off, a scoundrel, and a german sausage eating Lord of a sprawling property.
I did notice line 3 was a tad poor so I have changed it. I hope to tighten it in due course.
Thanks all for reading it.
A good title might be
"How we meant to leave it".
very sweet poem as ever, moving in images
"Somewhere in the midst of nowhere"; "blackened in wet mascara" (I suggest by black mascara); and my favorite: " "She presented conversation like a guilty bouquet."
Some lines not nearly up to that level of excellence: "amongst the flowers" strikes a false note. Loved the ending! Humorous!
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