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Determination (Free verse) by Birdman42s
Determination
It's not the sparks that leap
to bite the sky, the thrill
of flames that chase the cold;
the warmth I crave is deep,
and I'll not rest until
the coals themselves I hold.
It's not a fragrance poured
from twisted lips, its scent
diffusing as it drains
from life already cored;
I want the truth, unbent,
and dew that leaves no stains.
It's not the steps of mute
compliance, nor the pace
of those who claim they've won;
my pain may be acute
at times, but it's my race --
and I have just begun.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.222222
Weighted score: 6.611111
Overall Rank: 586
Posted: November 9, 2002 8:29 AM PST; Last modified: November 9, 2002 8:29 AM PST
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