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I'll be your Gimp (Free verse) by GAY AS FU*K I will suck a snooker ball,
just tie me in leather and whip me,
I'll be at your beckon call,
With your mouth boy strip me.
I will beg, i will plea,
for you to come all over me,
for I'm your servant of pleasure,
so why not reap my treasure,
We'll listen to Erasure,
and I will dance on air,
because for you i care,
I'll be your gimp,
just in return be my chocolate pimp.
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Posted: July 1, 2003 12:31 PM PDT; Last modified: July 1, 2003 12:31 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.611111 Overall Rank: 12485 Comments:
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JoyLuck @ 68.75.20.230
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1-Jul-03/12:38 PM
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i think you can be gayer
What an utterly repugnant and pathetic attempt to force your sexuality on us. May I respectfully suggest that you refrain from boring us all with your drivel and bugger off somewhere else. I have no problem with nancy boys but militant homosexuals are another thing now please for the sake of this reputable site leave forthwith.
Your scoundrelizing this great site.
I often find it extremely ironic how quickly another writer would come to censor someone's expression. Force our sexuality? As if we have not been forced your sexuality for centuries. We're here, we're queer, so let's drink a beer and toast to the bigots of which we will not fear.
priceless
amusing, actually its funny, taking many risks, good shock value to piss off the modest, but i have to say its projected image is repulsive.. indecisive i am, so i wont vote, but just leave you with my comment.
Erasure?? FAG. You're in Manchester, you should listen to Joy Division like a proper faggot. Ian Curtis was a fag. Why do you think he killed himself?? (Hint: He was a fag).
Ian Curtis was maried. was he gay as well? I didn't know that. No wonder he felt a bit confused about things. maybe he was a chocolate pimp. He would'bve hated Erasure though, would probably have been more of a Pet Shop Boy.
I am sure your poems suck better than you do.
Very interesting. Expressive in a provocative and unrelenting manor.
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