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I'll be your Gimp (Free verse) by GAY AS FU*K

I will suck a snooker ball, just tie me in leather and whip me, I'll be at your beckon call, With your mouth boy strip me. I will beg, i will plea, for you to come all over me, for I'm your servant of pleasure, so why not reap my treasure, We'll listen to Erasure, and I will dance on air, because for you i care, I'll be your gimp, just in return be my chocolate pimp.

SupremeDreamer 1-Jul-03/6:31 PM
amusing, actually its funny, taking many risks, good shock value to piss off the modest, but i have to say its projected image is repulsive.. indecisive i am, so i wont vote, but just leave you with my comment.




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