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Burst! (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
When
the moon
Pierces the darkeness
and Cascades down the
valley Ripping trees
Shoving rocks Flushing foliage
Washing into the River Swelling
the Current Raking sand Gouging soil
Drowning the mouth Pressuring the reservoir
Churning moss Agitating fish into frenzy
Boiling the surface into multiple Tsunamis
Fissuring the dam overcharging the turbines
and Engulfing the oxygenation....
DISCHARGE THE WALLS!
And flow forth
unto yourself.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.4706473
Overall Rank: 2838
Posted: May 19, 2003 6:45 PM PDT; Last modified: May 19, 2003 6:45 PM PDT
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"do a little dance andthendrink a little wata"