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Mirage (Free verse) by Wulf
The principled father
mother of purity
absence of vanity
sincerity of purpose
all things humane
freedom at any cost
safety in numbers
glory in defeat
atonement of sin
pity as pacifier
normal assemblage
benevolence of royalty
holiness of priests
the erect politician
moral policeman
singular motive
best intentions
chaste kisses
government promise
lap of luxury
sincere beggar
sex for sex sake
love for sex sake
reconciled victim
rehabilitated rapist
whenever 'i'm sorry'
love other than self
existence oases
a dignified death
sincere amnesty
this bears repetition
this bears repetition
art for art's sake
man in Gods' image
woman as reward
honorific recognition
original sin
any reference to aeon
distance as love bait
i won't hurt you
and my dog doesn't bite
obvious intentions
light of day
light of night
wise men
animals as speaking idiots
other than human
shared prosperity
faith in dervish
sanity of justice
welfare Cadillac
clean water
drug counselor
psychological awareness
social security
hope for the poor
foundation of family
driving on the telephone
green peace
war on drugs
capital expenditures
common sense
lifetime warranty
satisfaction guaranteed
customer service
free rent
damage deposit
Christian forgiveness
the open sea
dumb animals
good guys and bad guys
them and us
clean living
winners and losers
a free ride
one square inch unpolluted
relief valve
escape key
any true witness
other than chaos
normal behavior
square corners
outer limits
inner peace
immaculate conception
protective custody
a round tuit
acceptable losses
the flying man
death of Gods
age of reason
missionary largesse
preventative medicine
innocent until
free will
human connection
mated for life
dominion
funereal disguise
bread winners
non combative personality
organized religion
a striving toward normalcy
process of elimination
running stool
amicable reconciliation
affordable housing
good drivers
critical mass
high priest
drug lord
dutiful wife
eclectic taste
the third breast
idle conversation
state of unrest
state of Colorado
state of being
merciful heaven
absolution of sin
war and peace
battle mockup
unadulterated flesh
season of plenty
life on far planets
this one in particular
backup system
angels and hat men
ladies of the night
accidental collusion
intentional chaos
will to power
wont to shame
acronymical truth
prison politic
unequivocal device
prayer endings amen
random violence
any number of senses
innocence lost
a shovel full of Eden
plastered in Paris
father as bitch
same gender parents
man as God
holy remembrance
holy cow
mythical union
forward thinkers
successful committee
i didn't mean to
a bad seed
the good son
overkill
homing pigeons
Christ on a toothpick
sincere prostitute
solemn oath
They sat in a circle, the two of them. Theirs was a shared awareness of
no thing. Infinite possibility, a vision of lords, dansed between them,
will of Creator, wisp of eessence. Incapable of boredom, with some
sense of humor, a combined energy, was given birth the moment.
Having no sense of entitlement, not only did they not name the Child...
Time, it was loosed, allowed a will of its own. These of the circle
yawned as their Child adopted a spirical tone, wrapped itself in
Universe, mad inventions of its own. These made a terrible howling and
the parents, annoyed by the Child's noisome toys, allowed the two-sided
circle to close. Thus were erected the heir apparent and errant parent.
This spoiled Child, angry and alone, playing in the blood of its mud,
began to manufacture discontent and a creature whose image mirrored what
it imagined it might be, given mortality and physical form. These chose
to idolize themselves and porcelain Gods in their image.
The Child, Time, swore a fury of vengeance upon these it had made, that
they would wither away, face all ways a declining and decrepit flesh,
hunger ever more for youth as Time itself devoured all before and about
them.
Finally each moment was named for this merciless master. The hollow
spheres of its kingdom were erected temples owned in the name given the
master and that name was GOD.
fidelity of flesh
unintentional idol
death after life...
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.9205313
Overall Rank: 9439
Posted: July 1, 2003 7:22 PM PDT; Last modified: July 1, 2003 7:22 PM PDT
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But your ending was interesting and well written, but lacks a creative presentation and form. It does have a very nice mind tickling point that makes me wonder what exactly are you saying. I'll save my vote in hopes of seeing you rewrite this.