| Re: From Don ... For Me by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:37 AM |
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Too incomplete. Expand on what your saying.
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| Re: REALITY by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:34 AM |
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Needs more content but this would be a LIFE GETS BETTER AWARDE if I hadn't all ready given you one today. Trust me girlfriends come and go but the poems you write about them will haunt us forever. -8-
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| Re: At A Loss by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:30 AM |
Been there it sux.
LIFE GETS BETTER AWARDE -10-
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| Re: Senses I Have by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:28 AM |
Truth be told we only see what we want to see
Tounges lie with ease
Your ears are like our eyes
If you gave your heart fully then when it broke you'd die
Still to be fair not a bad poem -6-
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| Re: ALONE by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:19 AM |
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Nice subject matter and I like the way you question yourself. I really think that you worked to hard to confine your thoughts to your 4 line stanza. Let those thoughts run free.
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| Re: Goodbye Daddy by NewbieMe |
22-Feb-03/9:14 AM |
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Hmmm... I like the way this sorta moves you but the language seems just a little forced. -8-
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| Re: a comment on My Poor Heart by NewbieMe |
21-Feb-03/5:03 PM |
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Hey don't worry about it. Just giving you some insight for next time.Trust me we all start out sucky but the goal is to get better. ;)
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| Re: My Poor Heart by NewbieMe |
21-Feb-03/2:21 PM |
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Dull kiddo. Try a whole new aproach to your writing style. You need some depth.
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| Re: a comment on Hidden Meaning by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
20-Feb-03/4:20 PM |
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What? Like the title says the meaning is hidden. Its not really about a city.
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| Re: Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin |
19-Feb-03/3:06 PM |
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| Re: Perversions 6: Judgement Day by razorgrin |
19-Feb-03/3:05 PM |
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Smiley I Love You. These perversions always brighten my day. They're funny as usual.
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| Re: Sharks For Libido by scitz |
17-Feb-03/11:07 AM |
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Okay don't look it up. Whatever flips your pancake.
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| Re: Small Teeth in a Glass Bowl by Fear of Garbage |
17-Feb-03/7:40 AM |
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| Re: Atonement by aperfecttool77 |
17-Feb-03/7:33 AM |
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Wow... I thought that I'd never agree with D.A. but please do shut up.
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| Re: a comment on Sharks For Libido by scitz |
16-Feb-03/6:41 PM |
Yes well I rather enjoy being happy but thats probably not the definition your using. Hers's one for you D.A. Look up impotent. You should recognise your ugly mug right with the caption "can't get his winkie up".
:)
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| Re: a comment on help me understand by nolan |
16-Feb-03/10:45 AM |
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Ouch that comment actually gave me a headache
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| Re: My Mind by Deb_djb3113 |
16-Feb-03/10:43 AM |
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I feel like I've read this before
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| Re: Sharks For Libido by scitz |
16-Feb-03/10:41 AM |
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According to dictionary.com you misspelled your second word in line 2.
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| Re: Highlights From a Conversation at the Laundromat by bunniesnangels |
15-Feb-03/5:23 PM |
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| Re: nightly by <~> |
10-Feb-03/1:34 PM |
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